Talk:Agvan Dorjiev

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Agvan Dorjiev

Thnxx for youre concern but.... What,s wrong with this article? .Agvan Dorjiev was first buddhist lama and scholar to demonstrate a Kalachakra cult on West 1905.Or u mean that Wikipedia is not right place for him ?U could be a more specific and explain little bit more .--VanemTao 09:34, 9 December 2006 (UTC)

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[edit] Whats wrong wiht this article?

I have been waiting for some sort of advice ages and still no one has replied,There must be a reason why this page doesnt fit hier,Is there some one who could enligthen me about it. I dont want my page to be deleted.--VanemTao 03:28, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

Ignore PocKleanBot, it spammed a lot of pages without explanation. However, it is correct, in that the article does not follow the usual wikipedia biographical style guidelines, and has a number of grammatical problems. One obvious error: it gives two different birth/death dates in the very first few sentences. You show review the wikipedia style guidelines. I don't think that there is any threat of deletion. linas 06:17, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

Thnxx ! I,ll try to go further by myself now.--VanemTao 09:30, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Birth and youth

Most sources say Dorjiev died in 1938. Some say he was born in 1853, most say 54. Could it be some Gregorian calendar vs Russian ? or just unknown?. I deleted the statement about being a talented youth because I found no sources, I think he was, but then there should be some sources an examples. --Haakon Thue Lie 23:37, 30 January 2007 (UTC)

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