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Contents 1 What in the Sam Hill...? 2 First section, first sentence 3 globalize tag 4 First section, second sentence 5 First section, third sentence 6 First section, second subsection ("Certainty of guilt vs. presumption of guilt"), 7 strawman 7.1 (edit break) 8 Rationale of Age of Consent Reform 9 edit, rewrite, etc

[edit] What in the Sam Hill...?

What the hell is this? The article starts off with the clear implication the persons accused of statutory rape are sentenced without trial...look at some of this (from the first section, "Due process of law advocates"):

"Some due process of law advocates (including members of ACLU) oppose any age of consent, arguing that it is unfair to send someone to prison without proper investigation, and that statutory rape laws violate the basic principle of presumption of innocence'...Some deem these laws as unconstitutional."

I think my head just exploded.

"It is pointed out that, although this principle [due process - ed.] is used in practically all other criminal cases – including the murder of children, it is not used with respect to statutory rape or age of consent... They sustain that, on the contrary of (child) murder cases, in statutory rape cases the accused is already guilty even before the trial begins, and what is left to the court to decide is only the degree of punishment to be applied."

My head definitely exploded.

There's more... this is long article. OMG. What to do with this? Is there a WP:CSD for "Causes cranial explosions"? Should this article be AfD'd? There's a lot of stuff in this article. Am I actually going to have to read the whole thing and try to salvage something out of it? Nooooo... I can't bring myself to read any further for the moment. I'm afraid; hold me. Herostratus 04:15, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

I just found this after typing in "abolition of age-of-consent laws" into google. It is one of a list of demands on a website for The Communist Party of Great Britain:

• The abolition of age-of-consent laws. We recognise the right of individuals to enter into the sexual relations they choose provided this does not conflict with the rights of others. Alternative legislation to protect children from sexual abuse.

Here is the url http://www.cpgb.org.uk/documents/cpgb/prog_demands.html

Does this kind of thing deserve a mention? - Neural 01:44, 16 July 2006 (UTC)

I see no problem with the article that gradual NPOV editing and citation insertation couldn't fix. As for the "presumption of innocence" issue, they are simply saying that if you commit the act in question, you are guilty regardless of the surrounding circumstances. Slightly shoddy logic, at least unless someone can cite some case law to support it, but it's not THAT confusing... --tjstrf 19:02, 17 July 2006 (UTC)

The "NPOV editing and citation insertation" should not be "gradual", it should be immediate. This article makes too many POV asserts without sources. If the authors don't fix it soon I will pare it down to the sourced material. -Will Beback 22:28, 17 July 2006 (UTC)

• Most sections have sources - youth rights activists, pedophile activists, French intellectuals (especially Foucault) and French petitioners, which together comprise 80% of the article. Sources on specific countries' laws were recently added as examples. Paulo Andrade

• The part on the rationale of due process of law advocates does not present sources, it's true, but the lenghty section "rationale of statutory rape laws" in the article Statutory rape does not have any sources as well - Paulo Andrade

• The issue is not "age of consent", it's "abolition of age of consent". To keep the overall neutrality of information, I added the article "Initiatives to raise the age of consent" with interchangeable links (and also a paragraph inside "age of consent" with a link). Of course the two could be merged into "Initiatives to change the age of consent", but this would probably lead to size problems... Paulo Andrade Here is the link: Initiatives to raise the age of consent - P.Andrade

[edit] First section, first sentence

Sigh.

This is after editor Paulo Andrade claimed to have edited the article to remove POV.

• • TOday (July 22, 2006) I made several changes to introduce more detailed explanation about presumption of innocence, conclusive presumption/certainty of guilt, and rebuttable presumption/presumption of guilt. I believe now the text is more clear. Paulo Andrade 17:08, July 22 2006 (GMT)

First sentence:

• "Some due process of law advocates (including members of ACLU^{[citation needed]}) oppose any age of consent, arguing that it is unfair to send someone to prison without proper investigation"

The clear implication - later stated openly - is that individual accused of violation of age of consent laws are sentenced without investigation or trial.

If this is the case in Brazil, it must be noted that it applies only to Brazil. If the editor is talking about other countries, we definitely need to see cites, and the countries where it applies. If it applies to countries where due process is not in effect for other crimes, the statement loses all its meaning and may be considered a sneaky way of introducing bias.

It is bad editing for the following reasons:

1. It's probably not true.
2. Even if it is true, valid references are not cited.
3. Even if it is true, it presumably applies to a very small, insignificant group of far-right extremists, of limited notability for encyclopedic purposes.

Wikipedia is WP:NOT a soapbox for making of extremist positions more than they are, and the inclusion of extremly incendiary material such as this needs to be rigoursly cited - keeping in mind that citations should be, to the extent possible, from sources that are verifiable, neutral, notable, and peer-reviewed (when this applies). Ideally, sources should come from second-party descriptions of the position or group rather than from advocates of the position itself. Herostratus 14:20, 20 July 2006 (UTC)

• I don't know if this material is so "extremly incendiary" as you say, once 18% of respondents in UK seem to favor the abolition of AoC (see poll recently added). It's not 0,18%, it's 18% - or almost 1 out of 5 ! I believe there may be a tabboo on the subject, but I suspect this is caused mainly by censorship (or self-censorship) of the media. This UK program seems to be an exception. Paulo Andrade 17:00, 22 July 2006 (GMT)

[edit] globalize tag

Skipping out of sequence here to note that I added the

tag as it seems that at least some of the material appears to apply only to or especially to South America, which needs to be noted.

IF Brazil and other countries DO follow due process EXCEPT in a few cases, arrests for violation of age of consent laws being one of those cases, that should be noted in the articles on the legal systems of those countries. It seems wildly out of place here.

I guess in some countries child prostitution is a serious problem, and perhaps draconian enforcement of age of consent laws is an attempt to address this. (I would think that reform, rather than abolition, of age of consent laws would then be in order, but I can't speak for the politics of various other countries.) Herostratus 14:44, 20 July 2006 (UTC)

• I believe age of consent laws are not enforced in a draconian way in Brazil. On the other hand, child prostitution and child pornography laws are indeed enforced draconianly. Paulo Andrade 17:00, 22 July 2006 (GMT)

[edit] First section, second sentence

OK, continuing.

• "It is pointed out that, although this principle is used in practically all other criminal cases – including the murder of children, it is not used with respect to statutory rape or age of consent^{[citation needed]}, what would constitute a double standard."

Again - Brazil only, other South American countries, what. Last clause may be unneccesary, slightly polemical in tone, however it may be OK. "It is pointed out" is classic weasel wording, and there is enough similar wording in the section that I added the {{weasel}} templage. Herostratus 14:54, 20 July 2006 (UTC)

• I made some changes and now the text is more clear. This paragraph is not only about Brazil or South America, it's about modern democracies in general, mainly in the Western world. Paulo Andrade 17:00, 22 July 2006 (GMT)

[edit] First section, third sentence

• "They sustain that, on the contrary of (child) murder cases, in statutory rape cases the accused is already guilty[citation needed] even before the trial begins, and what is left to the court to decide is only the degree of punishment to be applied."

If I'm reading this right, "They" say that the trial is de jure merely a show trial. I think that the editor intended to put scare quotes around the word "guilty", that at least, although unacceptable, would show that the editor is only saying that they are de facto show trials

Again, unless this is about Brazil, in which cases, belongs in article on Brazilian legal system.

Yay, we got through all three sentences of the first subsection of the first section. To be continued. Herostratus 15:03, 20 July 2006 (UTC)

• • Now the text is more clear. The conclusive presumption (or certainty of guilt) leads to the fact that no evidence to the contrary can be given, because the accusation is based solely on the grounds of age. There is no "show trial", the present laws allow many defences, but they only serve as a means to determine the degree of penalty. It is not possible to prove "innocence" because guilt is assumed by the law, solely on the basis of age of the victim. Paulo Andrade 17:17, July 22 2006 (GMT)

[edit] First section, second subsection ("Certainty of guilt vs. presumption of guilt"),

• "The law on most jurisdictions assumes that the accused of statutory rape is necessarily guilty[citation needed], even when there is clear and convincing evidence that there was actually mutual consent, beyond any reasonable doubt, and in some cases even when parental consent is given." There is then a certainty of guilt.

This must be more South American stuff, I guess. Previous comments apply, move to articles on legal systems of those countries. (I think that in all English-speaking countries that I can think of, the idea that a parent can legally sell or give their child for sex would be considered bizarre at best.) In (I think) all English-spealing countries, children can only give simple consent (not informed consent, which is not consideredto be enough for sex.

• This paragraph just tried to explain a little more the mechanism of conclusive presumption, so as to differentiate it from the presumption of guilt/rebuttable presumption (which follows in the next paragraph). It has nothing to do specifically with Brazil, or South America. Paulo Andrade 17:00, 22 July 2006 (GMT)
  • In Brazil at least, and I suspect in many countries in continental Europe as well, law does not distinguish between several different types of consent. There is only a presumption of violence below a certain age. And by the way, of course selling a child is not legal in Brazil as well as in most other countries (I'm not sure about India or Iran or Afghanistan). This is legally treated as a form of prostitution. Paulo Andrade 17:00, 22 July 2006 (GMT)

• ''In some countries or jurisdictions (like in Uruguay), there is another age boundary below the age of consent (e.g., 12 and 15, or 13 and 16), so that for ages between the two limits there is a shift in the burden of proof (the accused has then a presumption of guilt [2] but has the chance to prove his innocence if there is clear evidence of mutual consent). The certainty of guilt in these places is reserved for ages below the lower one."

This is true in much of the United States as well, and I think other English-speaking countries. In the USA it's a state-by-state definition. This is covered in other articles. It is descriptive and, again, has little to do with the article title, unless the editor is going somewhere with this. Herostratus 15:22, 20 July 2006 (UTC)

• • Please show me your sources. I didn't find any possibility of a rebuttable presumption below the age of consent anywhere in the United States. Paulo Andrade 17:03, 22 July 2006 (GMT)
    • Look, this is ridiculous. Your language sounds like you talking about written statues, which you're obviously not. You are saying one of two things:
      1. The written statutes themselves specificy a presumption of guilt. If you're saying that's prima facie ridiculous.
      2. People accused of age of consent violations are railroaded. Look, its a rotten world. Innocent people get convicted all the time, and guilty people get off. Are age of consent violations any worse in this regard than rape, murder, possession of controlled usbstances with intent to distribute, or whatever? Then prove it. Wikipedia is not your soapbox to rail at the world and I will now demonstrate this by removing the entire lucicrous first section, followed by the others as required. Herostratus 22:29, 29 July 2006 (UTC)

Herostratus,

• It seems we have different worldviews. I don’t live in a rotten world. I do believe in laws, I use my real name in Wikipedia (I could use an alias like most people) and I frankly believe this world is wonderful in spite of all difficulties (and perhaps because of them). Paulo Andrade 15:10, 31 July 2006 (GMT)

• It looks like you didn’t understand the rationale for the abolition of AoC. In cases of violent rape, murder and in most other crimes, one is not presumed guilty, of course. As for possession of drugs, one can be found guilty based on unfair evidences (e.g. if you give a lift to someone with drugs, you can also be arrested and convicted), but law is not perfect.

With respect to statutory rape, it’s different. There is no need for evidences - the age of the partner is enough to determine the guilt. In other words, to prove there was no violence (nor manipulation or deceit) is not a valid defense.

This rationale is so difficult to understand? Paulo Andrade 15:10, 31 July 2006 (GMT)

[edit] strawman

The section "Criticism of lowering or abolishing age of consent" is tagged because (1) it is basically a set of abolitionist strawman arguments and (2) it somehow leaves the impression that there is some kind of dialog between equals, rather than between a tiny handful of ultra-right-wing wackjobs and normal people. I'll comb back later and rake it up, or maybe just delete the whole thing. Herostratus 07:05, 30 July 2006 (UTC)

• I see no connection between ultra-right-wing radicals and the ideas of those who want to abolish AoC. Foucault, for instance, was a leftist and a liberal. These extremists that you mention probably want to raise AoC and would love to see all adolescents using a chastity belt. Paulo Andrade 15:11, 31 July 2006 (GMT)
  • I understand where you are coming from, Paulo, but think this through with me. The left, generally speaking, favors protection of the individual, and especially the most vulnerable - the poor, the aged, children, the crippled, etc. - against the exigencies of this world, and partiularly against the effects of predatory capitalism. To the right, it's every man for himself. Removal of child protection laws, particularly child labor lawa, but also age of consent laws, is typical of the most extreme right libertarianism. It's a scary world, and it's a hard world, and the weak need protection. And children are very vulnerable people. Like it or not, they just don't have the physical and mental tools to survive well on their own.

• • Please read my comments at the end of yours. Paulo Andrade 16:35, 03 August 2006.

• • Establishment of child labor laws (and also age of consent laws) was definitely a left movement, at least here in the United States. Removal of child labor laws would "liberate" children to be exploited as cheap labor, as they were in the 19th century. Of course, a right libertarian would say Well its a person's choice to work or not. But Paulo surely you know that the world is more complicated that, that there are heavy pressures and unscrupulous persons in this world. Perhaps if all capitalists were paragons of moral virtue this would not be a problem.

• • Similarly, one big effect of the removal of age of consent laws would be a flowering of child prostitution. In the United States, child prostitution is fairly rare, and mostly confined to immigrant communities, because the laws against it are quite severe (while the laws against regular adult prostitution are fairly lax, in practice - often just a fine, or at most a very short sentence). Again, a right libertarian would say Well if an eleven year old wants to be a prostitute, why stop her. But there are pimps in the world. And they are clever, and ruthless.

• • Have you not visited the slums of São Paulo. There you will find children "liberated" to work as beggars, refuse pickers, petty criminals, and prostitutes - practically the only occupations open to children, who lack the mental and physical development to compete against adults for jobs in factories and offices. No one will hire a twelve year old to work as a secretary or machinist.

• • An adult is stronger than a child, much stronger. Physically stronger, more clever, more experienced, a more subtle thinker, a more convincing talker. I saw a comment from a fireman recently that said through about age eleven, children in a fire will usually hide under a bed or in a closet, even if an escape route is available. They find small bodies in these places. How can a person who believes that the way to escape a fire is to hide in a closet establish themselves in an equal relationship with a strong, clever, smooth talking, mentally developed person with a driving adult lust.

• • Foucalt, I don't know his politics. I suspect that he was mainly interested in being a gadfly, and in the 1930's he would have been happy to be a fascist. Certainly his philosophy ultimately devolves to a position where it is illogical to oppose evil (which cannot be defined anyway) up to and including Naziism, which is a big reason why he has become of interest mainly to acadamecians and no longer commands respect among laymen. Herostratus 17:18, 31 July 2006 (UTC)

• I'll read with more calm your previous remarks and comment on them later. Paulo Andrade 15:12, 01 August 2006 (GMT)

• Herostratus, here are my comments:

On your arguments - They are good from an intellectual perspective and I believe those who are related to age of consent could be included in the “rationale” or “criticism” section. Personally, I agree with some and disagree with others (however, my personal views are not important here and do not necessarily reflect in the counterarguments I show).

• To your arguments, there are the following counterarguments:

• On the left vs. right - You simplified your point. A good part of the left is composed of liberals with respect to behavioral issues. They tend to defend pro-choice arguments in abortion debates and also homosexual rights. They also defend civil rights, among which the due process of law in criminal procedures. There are also those in the left who defend more sexual freedom, including a whole generation who participated in the Sexual Revolution of the 60’s (feminists, hippies, intellectuals, artists, students, etc).

• Although part of the left may favor keeping or raising the age of consent so that the “weakers” can be protected, as you said, another part of the left may well favor lowering or abolishing the age of consent for one of the reasons aforementioned (e.g. more rights to the youth, more civil rights in court, a position against sexual repression etc.)

• On the other side, part of the right (mainly the far-right) is comprised of people who are very religious and preach sexual abstinence, so that they tend to favor keeping or raising the age of consent.

• And not only right-wing libertarians, but also left-wing libertarians may indeed favor lowering or abolishing the age of consent. The position of libertarians may be irrelevant, but they certainly are not the only ones who favor lowering or abolishing the age of consent.

• Personal reasons - The issue may be not only political, but also emotional to some. Many of those who suffered from sexual repression tend to favor lowering/abolishing AoC, so that others won’t have to pass through what they have passed, whereas many of those who were actual victims of child abuse tend to favor keeping/raising AoC, for the same reasons.

• The U.S. vs. Continental Europe - Other factors may well play a role. In most of continental Europe, for example, sexual education is “natural” and common at schools at early ages and most of pedagogy is derived from the school of thought founded by Jean Piaget, which preaches more freedom to the child. Additionally, capitalism is not so predatory there as is in the U.S. due to the welfare state system they still have (although less protective than before).

• On Foucault - As for Foucault, you associated him with Nazism and fascism. Frankly, I wouldn’t make such wild suppositions. Evidences are in the opposite direction. You probably didn’t read the full text of Foucault’s “Sexual Morality and the Law”. There you will find an association between two ideas - the notion of the “individual dangerous to society” and the theories of Cesar Lombroso about the “born criminal” (which were used by Hitler to justify the Holocaust). The text denounces the use of the idea of the “dangerous individual” as derived from Lombroso’s ideas of the “born criminal”.

• On child labor - I’m sorry, but the topic here is age of consent, not child labor.

• On the weakness of children - The argument is that children in general are inherently weaker than adults so that age of consent laws should be kept or raised, and so children must refrain from sex.

• The possible counterarguments are: (a) the reality on the ground shows that hormones speak higher and with or without laws they will make sex, if they want, so that age of consent laws only increases hypocrisy once what is forbidden becomes hidden; (b) the balance of power in relationships with older persons can be equalized in cases where there is full support or approval of parents; (c) today’s children are smarter and more mature than the children of 20 or 30 years ago, as they have access to more information and means of communication (cell phones, computers, Internet etc).

• On child prostitution - The argument is that lowering age of consent laws favors child prostitution. The counterarguments are many:

• • (a) In many countries with a lower age of consent like Italy, France and Spain, among other European nations, you hear practically no news about child prostitution in the streets, just like in the U.S.

• • (b) Laws about child prostitution typically are specific and separate from laws on age of consent. The client is punished, as well as the pimp. Evidences of prostitution or paid sex are investigated by authorities like any other crime. In Brazil at least, the establishments are closed and their license invalidated. If parents are involved, they can lose their powers as legal guardians.

• • (c) A higher age of consent may well INCREASE child prostitution and child pornography, and be in the interests of those who profit from these activities. One law of Economics says that “where there is demand, there will be supply”. If you restrict supply only to higher ages, while the demand for lower ages continues to exist, then supply for lower ages will assume other forms (either hidden relationships or the consumption of child prostitution or child pornography).

• • (d) One has the classical image of child prostitution as poor and often squalid children offering themselves in the streets or small roads. One of the things I’m learning while studying Journalism, Herostratus, is that the world of news does not reflect the real world. Child prostitution in the streets is true, but it’s certainly only part of the puzzle. There is also a niche of expensive prostitutes, usually with her bodies developed, and sometimes only for selected clients.

There is child prostitution also in the U.S., although it has to assume more subtle forms. Some 14-year olds look 18 and some 18-year olds look 14, so that sometimes the client does not even know about the real age of the girl, who may be using a fake ID. Remember the case of Traci Lords, who starred porn movies at 15 using a fake ID.

• On "heavy pressures, unscrupulous persons" - I don’t know why did you mention this, but I frankly believe that whoever has principles and a good character can resist all pressures of unscrupulous persons. That’s what I particularly try to follow as an individual, and I hope you follow this as well.

Hero, I also hope some of the ideas from this fruitful dialogue between us can be used to improve the section on “criticism”/”rationale”.

Paulo Andrade, 16:35 03 August 2006.

[edit] (edit break)

• If 18% of respondents in a UK poll want to abolish AoC laws (not 0,18%), this group certainly has a vast majority of “normal” people, and outnumbers by far any minoritarian fraction you can imagine, including the pedophiles themselves (researches show pedos represent 2% of the population in the U.S.). Paulo Andrade 15:11, 31 July 2006 (GMT)

Telephone polls are utterly invalid. There is absolutely no possibility of selecting a valid sample, nor any protection against people voting twice or indeed many times.Herostratus 17:18, 31 July 2006 (UTC)

The poll listened to people that had access to a qualified information (that is, after watching a special program discussing the subject), and I don't know if it was by phone or through their website. The technology for avoiding multiple votes already exists both in Internet polls and in telephone polls (some reality shows for instance use it). Paulo Andrade 15:10, 01 August 2006 (GMT)

What Herostratus says regarding surveys is correct, I've studied statistics and politics at university level and learned that voluntary call in respondents do not give you a representative sample. A survey needs to find a representative sample of the population (or poll the entire population) in order to conclude that the results will be "true". If you discount the posibility of individuals posting multiple responces, you still have the posibility of "gaming" where an action group encourages all their members, their members' families and so on, to all provide a certain response. If you discount gaming, you are still left with the only people who respond are; 1) People who watched the programme. 2) People who could be bothered or feel strongly enough to vote. and 3) People who watch the programme will probably already have a view in the first place which skews any result. All statisticians know, non-representative surveys are junk data. --Monotonehell 05:26, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

I've been bold and reformated the section, and also I might add that the wording of the question and the order of choices can have an impact on surveys. It's a bit like the old "Sir, when did you stop beating your wife?" legal question. --Monotonehell 05:44, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

I'd have bolder and deleted it, and I probably will later. First of all, as you say, its invalid. Second of all, all the respondants had just seen a TV program which, who knows how the information in the program was skewed. Third of all, let's be reasonable. No person with two neurons to rub together actually believes that 18% of the population of the United Kingdom thinks that the age of consent should be abolished, so what does this section have to do with the price of eggs. The whole thing is just cherry-picked to prove a point. What I would like to see is some real polls, Roper or Gallup or whatever, on the subject, although even those I'm leery of. They must have polled on the subject somewhere, sometime. Herostratus 09:13, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

I did consider zapping it, but it does add a bit of "colour" to the article. All it shows is that an audience of such a documentary are virtually split 50/50 on the subject... What was that quote about lies, damn lies and statistics? ;) --Monotonehell 19:58, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Rationale of Age of Consent Reform

If I may suggest something, I suggest that the whole sub-section “Criticism” inside section “Abolition” be transformed into “Rationale of age of consent reform”, being moved to an independent item, and comprising the rationale of all groups. This is due to the fact that the article is no longer restricted to the abolition of AoC.

Probably all present arguments used in “Criticism” may be included or improved in this new lay-out, and completed with new arguments for the other groups.

One possible model for arranging the arguments is what follows (example):

>> Rationale of age of consent reform

• Close-in-age exemption arguments
  • argument 1
  • argument 2
  • argument 3 etc.

• Arguments to keep or raise AoC
  • argument 1
  • argument 2
  • argument 3 etc.

• Arguments to abolish or lower AoC
  • argument 1
  • argument 2
  • argument 3 etc.

Another possible model is maintaining the present structure of arguments divided by subjects (e.g. “On child protection”, “On age limits and law enforcement” etc), just moving “Criticism” to an independent item like “Rationale of Age of Consent Reform”, and then add more arguments in each subject so that the main arguments for each subject are present. Probably some subjects do not apply to all groups.

• Subject A
  • Close-in-age exemption argument
  • Raise AoC argument
  • Keep AoC argument
  • Abolish AoC argument
  • Lower AoC argument

• Subject B
  • Keep or Raise AoC argument (variations for keeping and raising)
  • Abolish or Lower AoC argument (variations for abolishing and lowering)
• Subject C (etc.)

This seems to be more easily implemented, as the present structure can simply be renamed and moved, and then the work can take place, step by step. Paulo Andrade, 15:12 01 August 2006 (GMT)

Er, I'm not sure. But I would say, I think we'd be better of with less emphasis on criticisms and arguments, which are very hard to present in an umbiased manner, and which can end up being bait for unending edit wars, and more on things that have happened -- legislation that has been proposed, passed, or rejected -- candidates who have run, been defeated, been elected (on AoC reform platorms) -- books and position papers (emphasizing major-party positions) that have been published (with brief descriptions, not getting overly into details) -- polls (valid polls) conducted -- that sort of thing.

The RAISING of AoC section... its very bare. What HAPPENED in the Georgia, India, Canada etc. cases? Why then, why there? What were the votes? Etc... Ditto for the close-in-age exception section... There's been a movement over the past 20 some-odd years to implement these... which is only logical IMO. This is far and away the most sucessful recent AoC reform. But where did it start, where did it fail, what (in the USA) did the parties say about it, was there a seminal book or two that started it, etc.

Also, another thing that comes to mind... AoC reform is SO different in different areas, I think. The article Age of consent points to different countries, and maybe this info should be in a Recent Developments section or whatever in those articles... I'm not sure of this, just a thought. Herostratus 08:39, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

Eh you again, from my experience trying to fit points of view in an unbiased way into the Age of consent article I'd agree with your opinion on them. When Canada recently had some politics regarding raising the AoC there. Several anons jumped in to the article trying to push their PoV on the topic. I was within the same two weeks accused of being a "Leftist" and a "Rightist" by two different people who couldn't see that what they were adding was pure PoV. After trying to present all cases that appeared and trying to balance the positions with counter-positions and having angry editors with ownership issues dummy spit I shunted the whole section off to a breif paragraph in the AoC in N.America subpage under "Canada" simply saying that there are moves to raise it and opposition to that. This is why I was against merging the two former articles that this article now represents into AoC; they were two PoV camps that would have started an edit war. Better to let them war it out in their own article until a concensus is reached and link to it from AoC, I thought. --Monotonehell 20:05, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

Although the layout of the article has improved somewhat, I notice that some quite well-sourced info has been deleted along with the clean up. Does this have to be cut simply because some people think it makes the article unbalanced? Isn't it better to include all arguments, and mention the dissent, rather than just delete? I imagine that some editors are never going to be happy if they think something obvious is missing. -Neural 10:25, 4 August 2006 (UTC)

• • I think Monotonehell is right. Probably the article should be re-splitted into the two former ones (Initiatives to raise and Abolition of AoC). Paulo Andrade 16:43, 9 August 2006 (GMT)

Argh, that's not what I was suggesting at all. If we go back to having two separate articles as before we will have TWO POV articles instead of one that addresses the WHOLE subject in a balanced way. Previously we had one article with a jumble of unconnected claims and another article with a pne sentence statement and no references. I'm going to remove this split suggestion as it is a backward step after a lot of previous consensus that only occured a few days ago. --Monotonehell 05:08, 10 August 2006 (UTC)

• • But maybe an introdutory page called "AoC reform" wouldn't be a bad idea, including the main ideas of the 4 topics and links pointing to specific articles (like "abolition of AoC") with more details on a topic. Or at least in the case of Abolition, where there is already a large amount of information. Whenever another topic deserves a separate article, it could be created in the future. It would be like a general article on "Politics" with links to specific articles on "Communism", "Socialism", "Liberalism", "Democracy", "Dictatorship" etc. Just an idea. Paulo Andrade 16:43, 9 August 2006 (GMT)

That would be a good idea if there was enough materia lto warrant several pages. --Monotonehell 05:08, 10 August 2006 (UTC)

Okay I probably just went beyond WP:BOLD there and into starting a revert war. Sorry for that. But the fact remains that I didn't suggest spliting this page again at all. I've highlighted my words above and sorry for not being clear. What I was saying was I was initialy against merging the two former articles that make up this article INTO Age of consent. Mostly due to them not being of any sort of quality as they stood. They were at odds and a lot of work needed to (and still needs to) be put into them to make a valid summary of all opinion regarding AoC reform. Splitting up this page now would be a major step backward. There are no clear lines of demarcation to perform a split over. If we did split this into two articles we would have two POV articles, totally unbalanced. We need to summarise as many camps as we can find supporting evidence for, in a rational and fair way. That cannot be achieved in two articles.

Again sorry to Paulo for my heavy handedness there. *shamed* --Monotonehell 05:19, 10 August 2006 (UTC)

• No, no. Again you're right. I'm gathering more info and will add to the article ASAP, and I'll try to find also info on the other areas as well (not only abolition).Paulo Andrade 22:19, 10 August 2006 (GMT)
  • Hmmm... Anyway, Monotonehell, I still believe that "abolition" deserves (or maybe will deserve in the future) a separate article, with a link from AoC Reform, and that this wouldn't be POV, provided that the article is descriptive, neutral, showing its sources, and avoids using adjectives (unless they're in a quote). I see no POV for example if an article on "Socialism" is developed with a link from "Politics", even if other articles on other political topics ("Democracy", "Communism" etc) were not created yet. I mean, it has to begin somewhere. I began my research with "abolition" and may expand to other areas, however it would be good if this expansion wouldn't be made at the cost of the previous research. You know, it's a time-consuming activity sometimes... It would be good if other people added valuable info as well. Just a thought. Paulo Andrade 14:44, 11 August 2006 (GMT)

That's true in many respects, but a topic like socialism has a lot of history and an article can cover what has passed. Whereas AoC abolition is still a hot button topic and is mostly rhetoric. There's so little academic literature on the subject that all we seem to present here is the opinions of certain groups. That's going to always be POV, unfortunatley.

Abolition is a part of 'reform'. Having all forms of reform on one article puts all the cases together and presents a more balanced and complete encylopedic picture of the topic. You've said that it deserves its own article. What exactly would having abolition separate from other forms of reform achieve?

On your second point, is there any research that has been removed that you can point to as something that should be reintegrated? --Monotonehell 01:49, 12 August 2006 (UTC)

I agree in part with you. But think about this: (a) Wikipedia has separate articles on Satanism, Neonazism and White supremacy, along with Pedophile activism. All these are hot issues that deserved a page; (b) in Politics, there are separate articles on Anarchism and Libertarianism, although they represent very small minorities;

(c) On the other hand, "Abolition of AoC" is probably not so hot as these topics and is much likely not so minoritarian. It's a legal issue, maybe we should compare it to abortion or marijuana for instance. On abortion we have pro-choice and pro-life; about marijuana, there is legal issues of cannabis, with links to four separate articles about decriminalization - 1 wikinews

(decriminalization in Mexico) and 3 articles (Cannabis reclassification in the United Kingdom, Cannabis legalization in Canada and Drug policy of the Netherlands);

(d) As for the academic literature, I added yesterday some literary references (section "authors"). I don't see the difference between the opinion of authors and the opinion of groups. I mean, if an article describes the opinion of X or Y, it is not advocating anything, it is just providing a fact (like in pro-choice or in the 3 articles about the decriminalization of marijuana).

(e) of course, a section on abolition inside "AoC reform" should continue to exist, but the main rationale for creating a separate article is due to size problems. Another reason is to create a condition in which the "unbalanced" tag can be removed (it was placed on the grounds of disproportionality in size between "abolition" and other sections).

(f) no relevant information has been removed yet from "abolition" that I have noticed, but my concern with size refers to the future. I probably will add new info on "abolition" and in other sections as well. Paulo Andrade, 23:47 15 August 2006 (GMT).

[edit] edit, rewrite, etc

I'm going to be bold and just rewrite, and try to keep as much content as possible, while phrasing and structuring in a more coherent manner. This seems like a fairly hot spot for conflict, so I hope my soft tread with NPOV works for everyone. If I change any content or meaning that you feel should not be changed, please fix up after me and drop me a note letting me know where I went wrong. I'm newer and would like the feedback. Here goes- Resonanteye 13:16, 27 November 2006 (UTC)

This drained me. time to go play in the early morning garden now. Resonanteye