Talk:Advanced Recon Commando

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[edit] Known actions

The last section (the part referring to Ord Cestus) is full of problems. I'd fix them, but I don't know what the source material is.

• Where is this info from? I assume it's from one of the comic books mentioned, but I don't know.
• Why does it say his brethren are "docile"? If this guy is an ARC trooper, then his brethren aren't docile at all. If he's not an ARC trooper, why is he in the article?
• How was he "later known as Jangotat" if he was killed doing whatever it was he did? He didn't have a "later".
• The whole conflict, and what he did to overcome it, is completely unclear. Evidently he reinterpreted orders and unravelled an ensnared situation. Huh?
• How does undermining a planet's economy help to secure it? That's very unclear.

I'm going to be bold and take this section out for now. If someone wants to re-write it and put it back in, feel free. Kafziel 18:27, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

i dont know how to give citations but the part where its says they are preety much raw jango is from the book Star wars republic commando Hard Contact by Karen Traviss and it s said by Darmen if im correct

[edit] This article needs TONS of rewriting

All of the article talks about SW universe characters as if they were real people! Please, please, read WP:WAF before adding content to this article, or if you wish to improve it. It needs a lot of rewriting.

For more involved editors, I've seen there's a Wikipedia:WikiProject Star Wars which tries to direct and organize all the effort these articles need. --euyyn 21:21, 20 August 2006 (UTC)