Talk:16 Volt

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[edit] NPOV

Naturally, wikipedia should refrain from making judgements on which album was the best or which song was the most aggressive, particularly without cites. The article essentially reads like a fan-written essay trying to pay some kind of respect or something like that. Falcon 20:14, 10 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Cleanup

The article is obviously not in wiki format. However, it is also patently unencyclopædic, and reads essentially like a narrative instead of an encyclopædia entry. Things like ellipses should be removed, particularly... this all kind of goes with the NPOV. Falcon 20:17, 10 June 2006 (UTC)

Actually, what it reads like is the Biography section of http://www.16volt.com/ —Slicing (talk) 22:54, 11 June 2006 (UTC)