Talk:Yigal Carmon

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[edit] Ungrammatical sentence: ambiguous meaning

The sentence:

During his time in Military Intelligence, he became a senior officer of its Unit 504, a small secret unit dedicated to human intelligence which was particularly active in Lebanon[1] and administers Facility 1391, a prison described by critics as "Israel's Guantanamo".

What does this mean? The tenses shift mid-sentence. Does it mean that he currently administers this prison? What's the connection to the subject?

Adam Holland 04:06, 17 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] removed haaretz ref

did not mention Carmon. Elizmr 22:15, 25 November 2006 (UTC)