Talk:Work Out

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The middle section of this article is not only non-objective but also contains the exact same large body of stuff that's in the middle of Jackie Warner and makes it irrelevant. This should be trimmed down and the section should probably be deleted from the Jackie Warner page as the information more concerns the show than Jackie. -User: Cwilli201

I went ahead and deleted the bulk of the Work Out section in the Jackie Warner article and placed a referrer to this article. There are still some huge problems with this article, including (but not limited to):

• We need Mimi's last name.
• The writing is full of run-on sentences and bad grammar.
• It is not NPOV.

--C-squared 06:10, 23 August 2006 (UTC)

Mimi is never addressed on the show as anything other than Mimi (which is in fact a nick name and not her given name). —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 67.167.248.208 (talk • contribs).

Surely, though, someone can find her given name, at least for a first reference in the article. Also, please sign and date your comments to this Talk page. --C-squared 08:19, 28 August 2006 (UTC)

The one part in the beginning says, "such as her relationship with her girlfriend Mimi, an artist." Didn't they break up in the season finale when Mimi threw a glass at Jackie at a party? Also, the italics look incredibly... childish.-Babylon pride 16:56, 2 September 2006 (UTC)