Talk:Wolfgang Grams
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[edit] What did he do?
This article is not particularly clear on why he was a hunted man since 1987. Was it just because he was associated with the RAF? Or was there evidence he was a key member or involved with the planning (or even commission) of crimes? Nil Einne 16:00, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Referencing
This article needs better referencing. Specifically, the eyewitness account and the claim it's been officially concluded he did not commit suicide. While this seems likely given that there appears to have been a cover up and resignations, we still need proper references Nil Einne 16:01, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] shooting of Newrzella
As far as I recall there are serious problems with the theory that Grams shot the GSG9 member. The fatal wounds (going from memory here) were delivered by a police weapon (9mm), there is no reason to believe Grams got access to one of the GSG9 weapons during the brief firefight. So, assuming the ammunition was indeed 9mm, Newrzella was either accidentally, or on purpouse shot by a fellow GSG9 member. So saying Grams murdered Newrzella is incorrect. If anything, Grams' execution might have been a coverup by the same people who accidentally killed their colleague. As it stands this article is not neutral.--Caranorn 13:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Grammar & Rewrite
This article is very difficult to read and I think the grammar and language used needs to be anglicised, thank you -- Librarianofages 03:00, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
