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[edit] I-War (Independence War)

An unique space sim from some years ago, and my first article form start to finish. I wish to hear some comments on it in order to perfect it. As I see it, all the relevant information should be in there, so mostly I'm conserned about readibility and clarity of the text. --The Merciful 20:04, 30 July 2005 (UTC)

Very good article, well done! In terms of readability it seems very clear. The only thing I noticed is that there is not a section for "Gameplay" describing game mechanics. The overview briefly covers this, I think it could be expanded more though. Over all, a very good article, I'd think about nominating it for Featured article. Jacoplane 00:05, 9 August 2005 (UTC)

Thank you very much. I tried to write the "overview" and its subsections from the gameplay point of view. For example by mentioning the use of cutscenes as clues to mission solutions. So I view "overview" as the section explaining the game's gameplay, and don't see a need for a separate "gameplay" section.

Given that I'm familiar with the game and I prefer brief, to-the-point, text, I may well have omitted some details, and be blind to it. Could you give some pointers on which area of game mechanics in your opinion needs a closer explanation? (I just expanded on the flight dynamics a tiny bit.) --The Merciful 18:26, 13 August 2005 (UTC)