Talk:Whispers
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[edit] editting needed
i haven't read the book, so i can't do it, but the summary that is up now is a chore to read, and not always clear what's happening. --dan 08:41, 3 October 2006 (UTC)
What's more, the use of tenses is inconsistent, and the tone generally needs improvement. I added a "Cleanup" template. I'd do it myself, but I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep. Septegram 22:53, 2 November 2006 (UTC)