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I've been watching the edits made here, but now I think it is time to intervene, why have the sourced references been removed, and secondly what exactly is the "the italiante house" as mentioned in the lead. presumably this means Italianate, however. it is wrong to refer to West Wycombe as Italianate, this term refers to 19th century houses in a vague Neo-Renaissance style - is anything the house is more Neoclassical Either please add reputable references for these changes or reinstate the original references. Thank you. Giano | talk 21:01, 12 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] FA?

Oops I missed that this article had passed FAC and so Ill raise my comments here instead! Basically how did it manage it. Ok the writing is pretty good but those images? It makes it nearly unreadable. There are probably far too many to complement the article property. Ok maybe not too many but certainly badly place. At least one section header is out of alignment and some of the text doesn't flow. A big problem is the captioning which takes up almost as much space as the images!!! (no 3 of the FA requirements are well placed pictures with succinct captions).

Also there are quite few red links that need fixing - with a stub or by finding the right article. Some artist / nobleman names etc. could - if an article is not warranted - have a short section in the footnotes rather than a red link. Stuff like that.

I noticed a few weaselly type words - it doesn't at times read like an encyclopaedia! eg: the finest architects of the time (might be a slight misquote but finest is the word I mean and that's there) could read The top architects or The most respected architects..

Finally those footnotes. It's all very well to say Knox PG XXX but an excerpt or quote would be nice to verify this fact. Or even just a note explaining what Knox says. Normally this wouldn't bother me but historical accuracy is difficult; so definite facts that can be verified from excerpts rather than by buying the book would be nice :D

Just small issues I know but it would be nice to see a FA looking like one ;) --Errant Tmorton166^(Talk) 12:28, 14 November 2006 (UTC)

You'll notice with this style of referencing that "Knox, Tim (2001). West Wycombe Park. Bromley, Kent.: The National Trust. " is under the "References" section - the footnotes then refer in short to the publications listed in long form in the preceding section.

I'm not sure that finest is weasly - "superlative of fine - Of superior quality" where's the weasiliness? - Your suggestions replace one apt and appropriate word for two which are less so.[1]. Regards --Mcginnly | Natter 12:45, 14 November 2006 (UTC)

Frankly, none of what you're saying is justification for an objection on FAC. They are non-actionable and personal interpretation. You can no more tell me that a caption is "succinct" than I can tell you it is not, and what is "too many images" for one is "not enough" for another. The objections over strong language aren't really supportable, given the fact that the work is researched and cited for its claims. As for having seen "better ones not make it," that's back to the old "two wrongs" argument. I cannot see how your comments are really actionable, rather than personal. Geogre 12:53, 14 November 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments, Tmorton166. The FAC was successful because the vast majority of comments supported the article.

On images, the article is quite heavily illustrated - you complain that there are too many images; I think that the number of images is a bonus. The images - and more particular their placement - were queried in the FAC discussion, and the images were moved around a couple of times to help solve some people's problems. Unfortunately, every person seems to have a different browser, screen setup, resolution, visual preference, etc., but please go ahead and make some changes if you think you can see a way to improve the article. This is a wiki, after all. Similarly, if the captions are not succinct enough for you, would you care to suggest which parts should be excised?

On redlinks, redlinks are not a FAC criterion (see WP:WIAFA). Redlinks are one of the benefits of a wiki - they encourage others to contribute material to make the redlink turn blue. Many people think it is more helpful to leave a link red than to create a bunch of one-line stubs which provide a misleading impression of Wikipedia's (lack of) comprehensiveness. Are you really saying that an article on an obscure topic, where Wikipedia omits many related topics that should have articles, should not be featured, however good they are?

On "weaselly" words, I suspect they come from the cited sources - Knox et al. probably use the odd relative or superlative. I'm sure Giano II will resolve any particular concerns that you may have, if you point them our.

On footnotes, the very reason for providing inline citations is to allow a reader to verify the information in the article by reference to the original sources - they are not usually there to include excerpts from the original sources (although it can be effective, particularly if different sources contain different information, or some intepretation of the sources, not directly relevant to the article itself, is required). -- ALoan (Talk) 14:44, 14 November 2006 (UTC)

• Hi TMorton thank you for your comments here and here [2]. I note your comments on the FAC page were your first ever contribution to a FAC debate, and as your interests lie in computing and electronics I feel honoured you should have chosen a page mostly by me on a "Neoclassical building" as your first foray into featured articles. However you are probably inexperienced in the ways and means of a page becoming a featured article. Flattering as it is that you think I have only to put pen to paper for any old rubbish to become an FA, sadly that is not the truth. This page was on the FAC page for some time, and was commented on by both editors known and unknown to me. There were objections which were when possible addressed, when such address was impossible the "objector" accepted this with good grace. In fact the FAC process was a pleasant experience for me and an improving one for the article. That you come here now with your rather snide comments and objections, many of which are not actionable is thought provoking - I'm afraid if you want to check the references you will have to buy the book, I'm certainly not breaking copyright by quoting large chunks just for you. The number of red links for an article of this length is negligible. However should you wish to blue the links that would be a bonus for the page indeed. These with your other comments on the alignment etc. convince me you are viewing Wikipedia on a library monitor, which is something I can't rectify for you Giano 15:47, 14 November 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for everyone's comments... Giano first. Sorry you felt I was snide, the intention was not thus. Rather I am making personal observations that I feel will make the article better. 1) Yes I have participated in FAC stuff before. I was a heavy contributor to the Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Macedonia (terminology) FAC and made many suggestions there. 2) I know my interests / experience is in computing but I was originally (for about 5 years) planning to be an architect. I especially was interested in classical buildings and found this article quite by accident! Flattering as it is that you think I have only to put pen to paper for any old rubbish to become an FA, sadly that is not the truth actually i resent that comment! It is an excellent article and fairly well written. I enjoyed it and it is deserving of FA status - to a point.

Now the issues I raised. I will concede all but the images are not part of FA guidelines. However I have seen FAC fail due to even a few redlinks! I may have been overly harsh with that comment tbh but I found several links that are (not crucial) important to understanding the piece: fêtes champêtres is interesting, what is it?? Is it a local 'event' or an actual encompassing name! Also service wing, what context is that in? Can another link not be substituted - does it even need to be a link!

Image placement I guess is just a browser problem. The article looks a bit 'enclosed' to me.. Using FF and a 17 inch monitor.

As to the referencing, it's a really bugbear of mine :D sorry!! Basically what I was suggesting was not great chunks of text but something more substantial than a page reference. Eg the first inline ref.. it could say Knox p 62. Suggested in the Journals of John Dashwood written at the time or whatever. It provides a bit of extra context and information. Saying a page reference is (IMO) useful to about 1% of the people reading the page - and they won't need the information anyway! It certainly adds to the article to give the facts context...

Then again I always bitch over references so srroy again! :P

Again weaselly words I will concede. In truth the one 'example' I had was the only one and it was probably unfair on Giano to suggest it!

To sum up. WP:AGF guys :P and yes it is a great article that I, as a pedant and perfectionist, would love to see slight additions and tweaks to make it better. Dont take it to heart Giano!! I'll back out slowly now before any more come to mob :P and go back to my computer magazines. If anyone feels the same /I've convinced them and make the tweaks then great. If not no harm done - it's still a great article. I might have a go at some of those red links though :D --Errant Tmorton166^(Talk) 04:33, 15 November 2006 (UTC)

Well, I suppose I could mention assuming the assumption of good faith, but I would not want you to feel mobbed.

We ought to have an article on service wing and fête champêtre (a "country/rural feast/festival" - think Marie Antoinette on a picnic, with entertainment laid on - oh look: it is blue now). But I reiterate that redlinks are not a problem for a featured article. I'm sorry if someone else complained about them somewhere else - next time, tell them it is not an issue. Image placement is a browser issue. Hopefully the current arrangement of images meets as many people's set-ups are possible. The footnotes really are there to provide page numbers as inline references, not to provide context. -- ALoan (Talk) 14:59, 15 November 2006 (UTC)

Yay blue links, always good! Im looking at the article on a dsifferent PC now and it looks better :D As to footnotes I still completely disagree but I guess that is a personal thing but I dont see the use of them if you are backing up a fact with non-contextual data. Note 5 IMO is great, exactly right. In the odd case just a page reference is ok BUT consider this: Knox seems to be the main reference for this (at least as far as the footnotes goes). The average reader is not going to own or possibly even have access to this book. In this case context is fairly essential. Then again I was just intrigued by some of the info (just borrowed the book now and it's a good read :)) and wanted in some cases just a little more... As I said I always bitch about references and footnotes.

(PS note the :P after 'mob', didn't mean it in bad faith :D ) Cheers --Errant Tmorton166^(Talk) 13:09, 17 November 2006 (UTC)

Nor have you been mobbed. You got energetic answers because you started by asking how this article managed to get featured; an attack you might consider withdrawing, since you seem to be in full flight from it anyway. Secondly, if you want to change FA referencing practice to a vision of your own, that's fine, but it would make more sense to raise the issue on Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates and try to change consensus there, rather than demand that your own system be implemented by an individual article at (what looks like) random. Bishonen | talk 14:20, 17 November 2006 (UTC).

Tried suggesting the referencing all over before but no-one seems interested... Inherent problem in this community unfortunately. And if we are talking about attacks I don't remember demanding anything - it was merely a suggestion. And one I consider polite. Unfortunately Bishonen you seem to have taken the usual path when I (or other people) raise points over referencing - I honestly still have to hear a convincing explanation over how Knox pgXX is of use! IMO it's better off not there at all :D Still I don't mean that as an attack it just gets me that people respond immediately with the 'stop attacking' comment instead of reasoned discussion. I wont retract my comment about not making FA, I personally wouldn't have voted in favour. (The book is excellent by the way, worth a read). I guess Wetman has the best idea in retrospect. --Errant Tmorton166^(Talk) 04:53, 20 November 2006 (UTC)

Splendid illustrations, I must say. And not a bluelink in sight. I rarely vote for Featured Articles myself: I find they are often an exercise in quibbles. --Wetman 15:48, 17 November 2006 (UTC)