Talk:Universum (Science Center)

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The translation from German was awful (probably machine-made). I removed the sentence

The numbers of visitors angezielten by the operator were by far exceeded in each year, then visit annually over 500.000 visitors the universe, which makes it one of the most successful tourist attractions of the Hanseatic city.

as I could not find any justification for it; indeed the opposite seems to be true (although, admittedly, other Bremen tourist attractions fared even worse...). Further improvement of language seems necessary, but I'm not up to the task. Huon 09:56, 21 April 2006 (UTC)