User talk:Twoggle
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Hello Twoggle, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few good links for newcomers:
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[edit] MSG
Hi, Twoggle!
I have reverted your edits to the MSG article, not because they are bad, but because your citations are inline with the text, instead of at the bottom, and are hyperlinks to medline, instead of proper citations to the articles themselves. This makes it hard to follow the arguments without clicking on each link in turn. It also makes it almost impossible to read the "diff" output that shows exactly what changes you made. Please see this document for a good discussion of how to use footnotes, and this document for the format of the footnote at the end of the page. Also see the food coloring article for some examples of how to use this citation style.
Thanks for your input, and please don't take this suggestion and revert in bad spirit.
--Slashme 06:27, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
OK, thanks for the new edits! Great stuff! --Slashme 07:39, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Aspartame
Hi, our combined efforts have resulted in an almost none-edit on aspartame, sorry about that. But I think it is important to tell what the metabolites of aspartame are (that should be on this page), though it should, there, be in a good NPOV way (so I understood your earlier move). I think it is better to rewrite that part a bit (I already did a bit). Hope to see you around! --Dirk Beetstra T C 20:02, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
