Talk:Tropicana Products

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

"Recently Tropicana released a range of 'functional fruit juices' targeted at the health conscientious consumer. These fruit juice drinks in the Essentials range include juices with added Multivitimins, Fibre, Calcium as well as light orange juice beverage with half of the calories and sugar of regular orange juice."

The spelling and grammar is terrible. Also, it just sounds like an ad, not a functional description.

I'd edit it, but "functional fruit juices" and "recently" are not defined in this section. "half of the calories and sugar of regular orange juice" is also an ambiguous sentence. What constitutes "regular" orange juice?

-Aga.