Talk:Today (album)

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don't be so hard, it was written by someone who had the passion that Elvis had. These days it is all so clean and blah blah blah. even roughness is planned - look at hoodies

Passion and roughness are both fine, but they don't belong in encyclopedia articles. I wasn't trying to be rude, I was trying to be honest. I'd make the improvements myself, but I simply don't have the factual knowledge to do so.Fedallah 19:43, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

Marking for cleanup. This article is a mess - it needs wikification, grammar, punctuation, formatting, and citation of sources, the whole nine yards. It doesn't read like an encyclopedia article, borrows copyrighted text without linking back to the source, is confusing to read - it's just not good at all. I'm calling for a complete rewrite. Fedallah 22:25, 3 April 2006 (UTC)