Talk:Then Came Bronson

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[edit] POV Tag

The extra information on the show is good, but it needs to be re-written to be more encyclopedic and represent a neutral POV. -- MisterHand 06:06, 28 February 2006 (UTC)

Okay. I am new to Wiki, but I'll get the hang of it. I have edited the article to present, what I believe, is a neutral POV.-- Luigibob 23:59, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] March 1, 2006 changes

I've made several changes to the article and removed the tag. All the deleted material is in history, so if it needs to be added back in in some form it can be easily retrieved. Here's what I changed, and why:

  • Removed "forlorn" in the description of Bronson, felt POV.
  • Removed flowery intro about "The Odyssey" and "On the Road." While well written, it wasn't very encyclopedic and read like original research. However, if we can attribute some of these statements to an external notable source, it could be added back in some form.
  • Removed the dialogue. I couldn't figure out how it helped the article or why it was important. If that can be asserted, then this too could be reinstated.
  • Reformatted the guest stars information into an easier-to-read list.

I didn't want to step on any toes by removing material, just get the article to a place where we could remove the POV tag. -- MisterHand 00:11, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

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