Talk:The Boom

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I'd suggest some grammar cleanup and setence restructuring on this piece. I may clen it later. :) 207.80.142.5 20:13, 2 Sep 2004 (UTC)

I'll try my best to sort out this machine translation now :p Barneyboo 23:32, 12 Oct 2004 (UTC)

OK, I've cleaned it up somewhat. A bit more wikification could probably be squeezed out, and there's a chance I've created a few inaccuracies in my cleanup. Barneyboo 23:45, 12 Oct 2004 (UTC)