Talk:Terry Ronald

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The subject of this article, Terry Ronald, has edited Wikipedia as
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The biography section appears to be copied from a published source. That is unacceptable at Wikipedia; it's also not encyclopedic tone. Please remove all information that has previously appeared elsewhere and rewrite the biography so it sounds like an encyclopedia article rather than an interview in a fan magazine. Angr/talk 08:28, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

Apologies: The person that made the page has used my biography as the lead page. This is my music biography, written by a music journalist and is in the style of most modern music biogs and not lifted from a fan mag. However, I will make sure that section of the page is edited, and therfore more in keeping with the encyclopaedic style of the site. I will use the biog as a link or clearly state that it is a seperate article. Terry Ronald.

Am I correct in my assumption that User:Honeybfly and Terry Ronald aren't complete strangers, because of the "I will make sure" comment and the pictures and sound files uploaded by Honeybfly. It is of course a faux pas to write about yourself ( WP:AUTO ) according to Jimmy Wales. Lucky for you, Mr. Wales has done it as well. In the future it might be wise to refrain from textual editing about yourself and artists which you represent. Images and sound files are generally very much appreciated, however neutrality is an important aspect of Wikipedia.
If honeybfly was editing on your behalf, please add {{Notable Wikipedian|Honeybfly|Ronald, Terry}} to the top of this talk page. KittenKlub 09:47, 25 July 2006 (UTC)