Talk:Steven Phillipson

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This probably needs editing for NPOV; at the moment, this reads like an advertisment. On the other hand, if his techniques are really as good as this article suggests, perhaps he should have a fuller article. -- Anon.

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Googling for him: http://www.google.com/search?q=Steven.Phillipson

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I made the latest edits to this page -- most of them for style and grammar purposes, some to add a bit more basic information.

I don't know who initiated the page, or what his/her motivation might have been, but I can assure you that Dr. Phillipson is of legitimate repute within the field of OCD, and his name well-known.

I don't know Phillipson personally; in fact, as my IP address shows, I don't even live near New York. I'm simply well-acquainted with his work. To my eyes, the entry doesn't read like an advertisement, but if you can point to places you'd like to see fleshed out, I'll take on the task of giving it a go.

(Deleted final sentence here; had misread history page.) - 68.41.175.119 22:17, 30 Oct 2004 (UTC)

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one of the leading
claims an unusually high success rate

Those phrases do not convey objectivity.

One of the leading CAN be objective if TRUE. Claiming an unusually high success rate can be an objective fact as well, since newer treatments that are more effective than conventional therapies would almost have to be described in this fashion The Stub Maker - 03:17, 14 August 2005 (UTC)