Talk:Siol nan Gaidheal
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[edit] Ultranationalists?
The term Ultranationalist seems a pretty strange word to use for this group. Ultranationalism usually means Neo-Nazi and other Far-right groups (such as these guys for example), now I don't know much about this organization but from the description in the article they don't sound particularly Ultranationalist to me. Radical Nationalists would perhaps be a better term, I mean these guys seem very similar to Sinn Fein, and nobody has ever called them Ultranationalist.--Hibernian 04:09, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
Your probably right about this - the term is misleading, and I have altered the article.--Shippers 22:38, 4 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Neutral Point of View?
This article is very biased and doesn't cite any sources. In fact, I've lived in Scotland all my life and have never even heard of Siol nan Gaidheal. I've certainly never felt "feelings of excitement and expectation" when the "kilted S.N.G. columns appeared", nor have I "flocked to join the ever-swelling ranks of Siol nan Gaidheal."
User:Martin Shipway has reverted it several times without explaination and his contibution history shows that he has only ever altered this article. I think he is a member of SNG using this article for propaganda.
--IslaySolomon 02:55, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
- "I've lived in Scotland all my life and have never even heard of Siol nan Gaidheal." - well you have now. ;) There's a guy who claims to be Scottish who had never heard of Jock Tamson's Bairns - well, that's worse I suppose. More neutral language may be in order, but I think the information that Martin Shipway has added is interesting, and most of it should remain in some form. p.s. If you look, you will see I have edited plenty of articles on different subject areas, in case you're wondering. p.p.s. I am only going to leave one NPOV notice, because that's enough. --MacRusgail 16:24, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
Ok, I wasn't seriously suggesting that my having heard of something is an actual criteria for including it in wikipedia (if that were true goodness knows what it would look like :P ). My point is that if you take what is there at face value you get a grossly exaggerated impression of sng's size and significance.
I haven't added the { {totally disputed} } tag lightly. Large sections of the article still read like propaganda and/or make sweeping claims that could simply be fabricated. For instance:
- "what opponents disparagingly labelled "Jacobite Romanticism" " - Weasel Words; who actually said this and when?
- "...Siol nan Gaidheal was broken up by the force of the British State" - If this is actually true there'd be newspaper coverage that could be cited
- "certainly young and old alike flocked to join the ever-swelling ranks of Siol nan Gaidheal" - "Flocked" and "young and old" have no actual meaning, a number should be given as well as a source
- "what was known as "The Englishing of Scotland" " - Who said this and when? (also shouldn't it be "Anglicising")
- "they worked unceasingly" - Meaningless peacock terms
- "not one member of Siol nan Gaidheal was ever arrested by the police and charged with anything" - This is an incredibly broad claim to make without any evidence of the size of sng membership.
- "a whole new generation of young people enthusiastically committed themselves to the cause of radical Scottish Nationalism." - Pure propaganda. How many young people committed themselves? And how do you measure enthusiasm?
- "extremely well attended" - By how many?
- "most incredible of all" - A matter of opinion.
Two that could be verified but aren't:
- "first time opinion polls showed more than 50% support for total independence" - If this is true it should be easy to verify. Just cite a specific poll and the organisation that carried it out, or a news outlet that published it results.
- "the Sun newspaper turned overnight from the Unionist to the Scottish Nationalist cause" - Again, very easy to verify, just cite two different editorials from that newspaper stating the two different opinions.
And, in my opinion, the most damning evidence of this page being written as propaganda:
- "the explanation being that our country was in mourning"
- "the determination of our Celtic-Gaelic warrior ancestors" - Whose country? Whose ancestors? Sng's supporters have actually lapsed into the first person.
The article also makes a passing reference to the Calton Hill vigil. Granted this is seen through the things-I-have-heard-of filter, but I'd have thought if sng organised this, it would be their one activity that received the most media coverage and should get more attention in the article.
Still, I'm glad people are taking an interest in this neglected article.
--IslaySolomon 19:42, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] User:Martin Shipway et al.
A heated, but ultimately constructive, argument concerning this article is preserved below. The version to which you reverted it was biased to the point of being a communication from the organisation itself. Please understand that statements such as:
- "Whenever the kilted S.N.G. columns appeared, a shiver of excitement and expectation spread among friends and foes alike."
- "anyone seeing the drum beating, black banner waving, Colour Party in their Black Shirts and kilts couldn’t fail to be impressed and old and young alike flocked to join the ever-swelling ranks"
and
- "it is remarkable that this particular organisation was not destroyed by the British State"
are simply personal points of view rather than verifiable facts and fly in the face of wikipedia's NPOV principle.
Since you seem to be knowledgeable on this topic I suggest you devote your efforts to increasing the factual accuracy and overall quality of this article, rather than simply reverting it to a previous version and abandoning it.
Thanks.
Would the Korean (IP address lookup) Users currently defacing this article please desist as the defacements have no basis in fact, evidence or sources cited.
1. I am co-organiser of the Glencoe Rally where the picture was taken (Copyright issues regarding that photograph are pending) and it is organised by the Scottish Republican Socialist Movement and NOT Siol nan Gaidheal. This picture is misrepresentative and probably breaches copyright.
2. No relevant evidence has been cited for using this article to bash the Siol with
--Jarvisbaird 12:23, 2 June 2006 (UTC)Jarvis
1. If the picture is irrelivant it should, of course, be removed.
2. I have compared the two versions of the article. Are you seriously suggesting that phrases such as:
- "it is remarkable that this particular organisation was not destroyed by the British State"
- "anyone seeing the drum beating, black banner waving , Colour Party in their Black Shirts and kilts couldn’t fail to be impressed and old and young alike flocked to join the ever-swelling ranks"
inally, aand
- "...the explanation being that our country was in mourning for its lost sovereignty and nationhood."
are written from a neutral point of view and not simply statments by the organisation itself?
3. The more recent version of the article does cite sources, or rather a source, s.n.g's own website. In particular a page entitled "Race, Ethnicity & Nationality".
4. A large portion of the new article is, in fact, lifted from the existing article The History of the Scottish National Party. Are you suggesting this is an instance of "vandlism" and "defacement"
5. I really have to question the worth of this article. For all the evidence presented (i.e. none) this group could simply consist of a few people and a website.
I find it strange, as well as suspicious that a series of different IP addresses should want to refocus an article from a semi-neutral standpoint to an "anti-English" standpoint.
Racist claims are VERY serious and must be backed up with hard, verifyable evidence. At best the citations were spurious and at times misrepresentative.
Whether an organisation has two people or two thousand, it does not justify irrelevantly labelling them racist without the first shred of evidence.
The change was half-badly written, half lifted from another article with an irrelevant photograph added.
Dodgy IP addresses, badly written edits, irrelevant photographs... and all to justify an accusation of racism against the English.
The argument concerning the neutrality of the existing article is possibly a case in point. If people list them here then there wouldn't be problem and we could debate them.
I'm sorry, but I believe the "anti english" article version to be poppycock and does a disservice to this whole website.
--Jarvisbaird 19:11, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
The offending picture and references to "racism" have been removed. Altering this article was not meant as a partisan act or meant to be the opening salvo of flame war. Please, please consider point 2 above before another knee-jerk "RV vandalism".
I must, however, defend the use of material from another article. The history of the SNP article is well written and uncontested and using this material is a good way of avoiding bias.
"Whether an organisation has two people or two thousand, it does not justify irrelevantly labelling them racist without the first shred of evidence." I agree entirely with this statement. However:
- 1. If an organisation has only two people it does not belong in an encyclopedia.
- 2. If said organisation maintains a website featuring an extensive article on the issue of race, then they become slightly more difficult to defend.
Chambers Dictionary [1] defines racism as: 1 hatred, rivalry or bad feeling between races. 2 belief in the inherent superiority of a particular race or races over others, usually with the implication of a right to be dominant. 3 discriminatory treatment based on such a belief
On their page entitled "Demography: The White Flighter Phenomenon",[2] s.n.g. state "the patent existence of a Scottish Ethnicity from the English Border to the Pentland Firth and from Harris to Buchan". Having identified the Scots as a separate ethnic group they state that "a bustling English Settlement located within Scotland is not a healthy viable community at all. It is simply an intrusive English violation of our National Territory". The page concludes that "every English incomer at present is suspect, the good along with the bad".
The article also advocates forced repatriation. It states that "should we swap our English for [Scots living in England] it would offer the exciting and interesting prospect of so many Scots returnees, qualified primarily by their nationality, having to manage and administer a thousand projects formerly run by English flighters".
During the course of this article SnG identify the Scots and the English as two distinct races and advocates the preferential treatment of one race over the over. In the above case this consists of forcibly handing property owned by English people in Scotland to Scots who would be asked to return from England.
I therefore believe that SnG are indeed a racist organisation, by merit of believing one racial group deserving of better treatment than another. I further believe that SnG admit this freely in their promotional literature, specifically their official website.
In the spirit of constructiveness I have left any potentially inflammatory references to race out of the current version of the article.
As for the multiple IP addresses, there is nothing "suspicious" or "dodgy" about connecting to the internet though a dynamic proxy server. It is of particular use, however, if one is trying to protect oneself from groups such as the "Nine of Diamonds Project". This is a shadowy republican campaign group which uses its namesake as a calling card [3] and conducts MI6 style training [4]. Of course you would know all this as you are its "Chief of External Relations". (A word to the wise, most secret agents do not keep blogs.)
Scottish "ultra nationalism" and its relationship with mainstream nationalist politics is a genuinely interesting topic, which is worth documenting in the wikipedia. Perhaps a larger article on the topic as a whole would be more appropriate.
Finally, a personal question: As someone who considers allegations of racism extremely serious, why do you spend your free time burning flags?
I should be angry and defensive, but I'm not. It's most ingenious your post. I'm most impressed. (n.b. you don't see everything about the nine of diamonds project, but then you weren't meant to).
I'm never going to admit something is racist when it's not, but you're clearly very bright. Your Intelligence and persistance impresses me.
The fact you compromised shows character. Fantastic. Thanks. This has been most fulfilling. If the Siol want to revert back to what was, then it is their business.
So, to the whole "flag burning" business. I understand your question but I feel that this particular area is irrelevant to this article as public burnings do not seem to be their forte, though I'm partial myself. Either suggest another venue for this discussion (proxies welcome) or e-mail me @ jarvis.baird@googlemail.com
--Jarvisbaird 21:47, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
As the person who wrote the article which is now under heated discussion, I admit it appears to be biased in various places and has few citations. This was the first article I put on Wikipedia and I take the neutral point of view seriously. I will re-write the article to a more acceptable standard as soon as possible.
I kept reverting this back as I was annoyed at the sweeping changes made to it by someone who had condensed it to a very small version. I was made aware by a friend that this person re-wrote the article to contain accusations of racism and it was my idea that said person was biased toward Siol nan Gaidheal. I also admit that parts of it were taken from the site although the National Organiser of Siol was aware of this and granted approval.
I will review the article and write something more professional as soon as possible.
--Shippers 20:18, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Further comments
I again suggest that instead of leaving "fact" notices everywhere, that one will suffice.
"the Sun newspaper turned overnight from the Unionist to the Scottish Nationalist cause" - Again, very easy to verify, just cite two different editorials from that newspaper stating the two different opinions.
- Comment - I remember this well, but it was partly a ploy to undermine Labour.
There has also been a questioning of the Calton Hill vigils for devolution. Again, very well known in Scotland, as were the mass marches organised by Scotland Forward which were supported by three out of four of the major Scottish parties. --MacRusgail 21:14, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
I have amended this article to make it more neutral, taking into account the points made above. I have removed the 'disputed neutrality' banner although if you have any problems with the new article, please let me know. Thanks.
May I also say that I did not lift anything from the 'History of the Scottish National Party' page. Most of the stuff came from the Siol nan Gaidheal site, specifically an article entitled 'History of our Movement'. Other stuff came from the sources cited in the article. --Shippers 15:16, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
Why has a lengthy and informative article been reduced by someone to a mere paragraph? This is not in the least bit informative. What was the point in this?? --195.93.21.42 18:28, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
