Talk:Simone Deveaux

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[edit] Clean-up tag

I added the clean-up tag, haven't seen the show so don't feel qualified to clarify & fix the things which are wrong. A lot in the article seems strange grammar-wise and possibly a bit more info than I think is needed in a character article, parts of it almost read like it's telling a story, but this is the most glaring of what I'm talking about; He after a light joke, Nathan talks about his father's depression and death.

After spending the night together, Simone and Peter briefly discuss the previous night in the fourth episode. They are interrupted by a knock at Peter's door, who happens to be Nathan.

Several days later, Simone comes by Peter's with the news about of her father. She says he suddenly awoke to tell her of how flew through the air Peter, then slowly passed away. Number36 01:48, 10 November 2006 (UTC)

I revised Simone's bio, cutting out all the fat and rewrote much of the rest. Primogen 22:48, 11 November 2006 (UTC)

Cheers, good job, I took the clean-up tag down (which I assume I'm okay to do, as I put it up.)Number36 04:29, 13 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Movement

I feel Simone should be moved to the minor characters page. She has no powers, and has not appeared in almost half the episodes. I feel her character served as a portal for Peter to discover his power but now she is done.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by 69.250.171.91 (talk • contribs) on 22:17, November 30, 2006 (UTC); Please sign your posts!

I'm sure the producers have a reason for listing her as a main character on NBC's official Heroes site and not, say, Ando or Eden. I think that moving her would be second-guessing the creator of the show. Primogen 22:30, 30 November 2006 (UTC)

Furthormore, even "minor" characters can have separate articles. Ace Class Shadow; My talk. 23:35, 30 November 2006 (UTC)

True, but now that you mention it Ando should probably get a page soon. I might start that later but feel free to do it if you want to and I don't get to it in time.