Talk:Shuttle Training Aircraft

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Hallo,

Helfen Sie mich bitte. Ich bin bilde zahlreich redigiere zum Artikel, der Shuttle Training Flugzeug genannt wird. Woran liegt das? Weil, war ich ein ehemaliger Arbeitnehmer für NASA von den Jahren 1992-1996.

Problem: Ich habe alle von meinen Ausgaben zum Artikel verloren. Gibt es eine Methode für zugreifen auf meine spätesten Aktualisierungen zum Artikel?

Also, ist dies fühlen?

Danke schön,

Judith Kalajnikova-Resnik

myjavabeans@sbcglobal.net

[edit] Shuttle Training Aircraft could have been better written.  :(

OK,

Switching to English now. I was disappointed on how the article was written. I worked for NASA from 1992-1996, and I know a little more than the writer (whoever that was). I take it someone from the inside contributed this info. Well, if that is the case, then the article needs to be written from an OBJECTIVE PERSPECTIVE not SUBJECTIVE. For example, it was written in a manner with the assumption someone out in the rice fields of China (yes, exaggerated) knows what a heading alignment cone is. Also ripped out all instances of 'astronaut'. What's that doing in there??? Astronaut has multiple meanings, Mission Specialist, Medical Specialist, etc. The terms must be PILOT and/or COMMANDER.

I tweaked the grammar throughout and combined redundancies. I also itemized the actions the pilot performs for ease of reading.

Reworded the photo caption. It was 'pa-the-tic'. It needed more beef. The idea is to inform the reader, 'Oh, so they are descending downward.' Not just 'Shuttle Training Aircraft in flight. :LAMO: Who in the h*ll will understand that?? I want the article to BE MORE SPECIFIC. The intent of the writer is to inform a bunch of cattle (sorry, again, exaggerated).

Another thing. Let's say a kid of the Dene Nation in Lutslk'e, Northwest Territories, Canada has a computer and they have internet. He reads, 'The STAs are located at blah blah blah. But there is NO MENTION OF WHERE. So, I added for the sake of sanity, Houston, Texas, USA.

The only reason why I'm being very nit-picky, and apologies for being harsh, is because I was their employee for 4 years, then switched jobs. As a former employee, I was disappointed. I expected better, and NO I AM NOT PERFECT, but at least have the courtesy to be more informative. btw, this article is not complete. I need to add hyperlinks to the ref's.

Welcome home, my Son 07:56, 25 October 2006 (UTC) J.M. Kalajnikova-Resnik

[edit] HAC

Isn't it "Heading Alignment Cylinder", not "Heading Alignment Circle"?

Scott Johnson 13:17, 16 November 2006 (UTC)

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