Talk:Shigeru Kan-no

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English needs correcting at least Dogsdinner 18:15, 4 Oct 2004 (UTC)

I tried to improve that, but the list like quality of the biographical notes on his studies makes it a hard piece of work. Since I'm not a native speaker I left the clean-up template in place so that a native english speaker may find and review my changes. --chris 論 18:12, 8 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Obviously my clean-up was unwelcome. Someone reverted my changes without comment, just wanted to state that I'm not responsible for the mess as it is now - again ;-) --chris 論 07:52, 11 Feb 2005 (UTC)

I tried to clarify the english, and order the paragraphs in terms of what would be the most important info to new readers. (The list of who studied with would not be familiar to most, so placed it last.) Hope this helps. Aine63 03:34, 31 January 2006 (UTC)