Talk:Share International
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[edit] Bias
I don't know anything about Share International, so I can't contribute info, but the tone of this article is that of religious propaganda. Can't this be rewritten from a more neutral stance? --Cypherx 03:51, 7 Jun 2005 (UTC)
True, I contributed to it before, but I think someone came and changed it all... CharlesZ 4 July 2005 20:18 (UTC)
I hoped I fixed some of the emic perspectives --Yanemiro 16:31, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Ellipses unnecessary
Almost all, if not all, of those ellipses are unncecessary. They have been deleted. Theshibboleth 02:46, 19 August 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Removed quotes and added different views
It's unnecessary to quote text from Share's website, it could be read there. Added different views to get a more neutral tone. Removed the sentence about new-religious movement as it seems that Share International does not focus on that subject. 15 September 2005 (UTC)
- I think some short quotes from the website are okay. Andries 17:48, 6 October 2005 (UTC)
[edit] The list of references is too long and incorrect
Most books listed in the references do not mention neither Creme nor Share international. I guess the list of references are books that Share considers important, but most of them do not describe Share nor Creme at all, with the exception of the book by Mick Brown that I added. I propose to shorten the list greatly. Andries 17:44, 5 October 2005 (UTC)#
[edit] Transmission meditation,"meetings" with divine persons, miracles=
Can somebody explain in the article what transmission meditation is. Some friends of mine practised it. Also they talked about meeting Maitrya or divine persons or helpers disguised as normal persons. And what I read in Brown's book and also saw posted on the windows on their office where I happened to be were mysterious hands and crystal crosses that Creme saw as signs of Maytreya. Correct me please if I am inaccurate. Please explain all this in the article. Thanks Andries 17:48, 6 October 2005 (UTC)
I think I just did --Yanemiro 16:31, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
