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[edit] Regarding merges

See Talk:Sailor Galaxia. ^_^ --Masamage 23:00, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

Okay, I have now completed all that merging! Whew.
The following images have been taken out of use because they're just too big: Image:Sailormoon lethe.jpg, Image:Sailormoon mnemosyne.jpg, Image:Sailorchi.jpg, and Image:Sailorphi.jpg. I've made combined pictures for the two sets of characters, which seem to work pretty well...but what do we do with the old images? --Masamage 19:05, 1 September 2006 (UTC)

Good job! I cleaned up the sections a little to make it fit better with the templates we've agreed on. Thanks! Xuanwu 06:42, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

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Sweet. I struck the 'The' suggestion, as our use of that in a heading clarifies that "Sailor Animamates" is a group rather than a person. --Masamage 01:15, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
Doesn't the plural form do that too, though, as in "Phages"? I struck out the image requirement as I don't think it's possible - you couldn't find an image with anime, manga and musical Shadow Galacticans. -Malkinann 03:00, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
Speaking of Phage[s], should we have an image of one, like Sailor Guts or something? -- RattleMan 03:15, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
Yeah! A male one, if possible. We won't add images for all of them, but just having one for the phage entry would be good. - Malkinann 04:55, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
That is a very good idea. But just to be sure: do we really want to sic this on unsuspecting guests? :) Also, I read somewhere that 'phage' is its own plural... --Masamage 09:39, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
Wikipedia-is-not-censored-for-minors, Wikipedia-is-not-censored-for-minors. Gaaah! *screams and blushes* Ok, that one's a little scary. Looking at the page, though, the only other one that really grabs me is the Sailor Stewardesses, or the Sailor Chef. Those show how the originally human form is twisted with evil, and enhanced with shiny things! Trouble is, the good 'establishing shots' tend to be on a wierd angle, to emphasise the POWAR of the MOTD. Actually, the plural of phage might be interesting to find out, properly. It's probably still phage, as it's a borrowing (of a borrowing...). But my original point with the PhageS thing was to say that maybe we could change "The Sailor Animamates" to "Sailor Animamates" and still retain the group meaning. Any confusion as to whether it's a single person or a group should be cleared up as the reader reads our Brilliant Prose.TM  ;) - Malkinann 10:05, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
Mua ha ha ha. X) And I like those you link, especially the Chef one, but I think that my personal favorite is in fact this shot of Sailor Guts. It's a guy for one, and for another it's probably the most obvious parody of a Senshi out of the entire lot. --Masamage 19:56, 18 November 2006 (UTC)

I think that shot's a good compromise. :) Wasn't Sailor Guts one of the first Phage, too? - Malkinann 22:29, 18 November 2006 (UTC)

Hmm...yeah, looks like he was the second. Awesome. --Masamage 23:32, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
Done.  :) My, he looks fearsome. - Malkinann 05:48, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
I just want to burst out laughing when i see that pic!Lego3400: The Sage of Time 22:03, 27 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Logo

The Black Moon Clan, Death Busters and Dead Moon Circus have logos (A black moon, a star, and a thing thats on their heads respectively) Does shadow Galactica have one... (I'm not that far...) Lego3400: The Sage of Time 20:49, 28 November 2006 (UTC)

Nope. I didn't think the Circus did, either... --Masamage 22:04, 28 November 2006 (UTC)

Yeah they do... They all have that little black gem on their head. And Queen Nehellia has upside pyramid made of 3 cresents on her head. Lego3400: The Sage of Time 02:51, 29 November 2006 (UTC)

Replied at Talk:Dead Moon Circus. --Masamage 03:03, 29 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] MC FLY

is mc fly a refrance to the band MCFLY? Sailor cuteness 15:53, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

Nope, their article says they weren't founded until 2004. They're named after Marty McFly, from Back to the Future--I have no idea what the Sailor Moon character is named after. --Masamage 19:36, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
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