Talk:Roy Harper (comics)

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[edit] Non-encyclopedic tone

This article needs a rewrite very badly, to streamline the purple prose and more importantly to make the writing more enclopedid and less fannish. For instance, the following sentence is not in keeping with Wikistyle:

At this second meeting, the five youngsters decided to become a team... and the Teen Titans were born!

Also, the word "Alas" and others throughout are non-NPOV, and need to be addressed. - Tenebrae 21:59, 22 January 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Justice League Unlimited

I've heard in a recent episode of Justice League Unlimited that aired in the UK that Speedy appeared along with the other Seven Soldiers of Victory. Should this be noted? He did, with Green Arrow. So yes.

[edit] Titans Tower plagiarism

This article seems to be copied almost entirely from here. I'm not sure what the thing to do here is, as I'm pretty new to Wikipedia. Lilyha 00:48, 28 January 2006 (UTC)

Okay, I tried to do a rewrite to make the two articles different, but this one still might be too derivative. Lilyha 15:04, 2 February 2006 (UTC)

Good work, but there are still quite a few paragraphs that are lifted almost word-for-word from Titans' Tower. I've rewritten the first half, but the second half (starting with Cheshire) still needs a deeper rewrite. TheronJ 14:34, 19 September 2006 (UTC)