Talk:Relentless (drink)

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Contents 1 Cleared 2 minardi 3 Adamshappy 4 Wikified

[edit] Cleared

I have cleared this page up, added a picture and details. Hope you like it! jimmy93211 june 1st

Needs more detail, maybe some nutrition stuff or something. Minardi

[edit] minardi

why do you feel my version should be revised to the previous one? it is a quite obvious advertisment, with repitition and weasel words. For example, why Relentless is 'better' than red bull is mentioned about 4 times. do you work for Coca Cola? Adamshappy 00:12, 19 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Adamshappy

Dude, at the time I didn't have the time to re-write the article but felt you were trimming too many facts out. Ive now had a little go at it and it seems to contain the facts but without slapping you in the face and telling you its better than red bull. Hope this is wikified. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Minardi (talk • contribs) .

[edit] Wikified

I've wikified this entry a bit, added a few links, re-worded a few sentences. Citations are still needed. JubalHarshaw 22:13, 26 August 2006 (UTC)