Talk:Raymond Hunthausen

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I would like, if I may, to replace the current article for Raymond Hunthausen. The current one is simply a copied article. Mine still needs some editing, but at least it would be something in light of recent events. ----Donovan 20:46, 25 Apr 2005 (UTC)

I agree with moving the article, but i also think some changes have to be made to the wording of the article, it contains too many "subjective" sentences, or adjective, if i may. But a good place to start, I hope the changes I made are fine also. Cjrs 79 19:28, Apr 26, 2005 (UTC)

Thanks for the updates. My first article, so I don't quite have the hang of it yet. But I do appreciate the changes made by everyone so far. ----Donovan 01:11, 7 May 2005 (UTC)

I've made a few minor vocabulary changes, and have added some detail, especially pre-1962, and concerning the visitation. Good work, gentlemen. ----Jim May 18, 2005

I'm continuing to make make minor changes-- sorry, I'm new at this, and have been neglecting to log in. So all the changes made May 17 and May 18 are mine. ----Jim May 18, 2005