Talk:Prodea Systems

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Articles for deletion This article was nominated for deletion on 1 September 2006. The result of the discussion was Keep (no consensus).

[edit] Is Press Release Language Appropriate?

Creating a fully integrated, seamless home network Proving users with simple, intuitive experience Providing a solution that is cost-effective, reliable and secure. Under development since 2005, Prodea Systems was founded in 2006 by Anousheh Ansari, Hamid Ansari, and Amir Ansari, who have a rich history of vision, entrepreneurial spirit, and ultimate success.

This is not neutral language. Some of the verbiage (specifically the hagiography of the founders) is Control-Veed right from the company web site.

I've rewritten it in "English". Since no hard details of the product have been announced this is just blah-blah PR. --Dhartung | Talk 19:44, 17 September 2006 (UTC)

I did not participate in the deletion discussion, though I would have weighed in with a "weak keep."

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