Talk:Polocrosse

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I've cleaned up the grammar, punctuation and organisation of this article and improved the clarity with more sections and shorter paragraphs. Does anyone know the first name of Mrs Edward Hirst? Refering to her in this way sounds silly and pompous and is less accurate than including her full name. Also, an article of this length could benefit from a picture. There was one there but it had been removed for being unsourced, and if it can't be displayed it seems futile to have that fact announced in the article. If you're not sure what I mean, see the version before my rewrite. Gruffle Gaw 08:56, 14 September 2006 (UTC)