Talk:Phil Pringle

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[edit] Article needs to be merged

This article just duplicates much of the first few sections of the Christian City Church article. The repeated content should either be removed from that article, or this article should be deleted. I would propose that the detailed content about them in the CCC article should be moved to here - normally most church leaders would not want so much material about themselves up-front in an article on their church. Halsteadk 21:29, 24 April 2006 (UTC)

Following sterling work by anon User:203.46.255.180, my comment above is no longer relevant. --Halsteadk 19:44, 15 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Writing style

Assuming this article stays, the style is too POV and there are a lot of non-encyclopedic sentences. The lack of hyperlinking still suggests this article's roots in copy+pasted text. What is the point of parts like the second sentence of: "In 1980 the Pringle family moved to Sydney to establish the Oxford Falls Christian Church. The church has grown significantly in that time" - of course it has grown significantly, it didn't exist in 1980 if it was "established" then! Halsteadk 21:54, 24 April 2006 (UTC)

• There is nothing POV about that statement, growth from 12 to 6000 could hardly be described as anything other then significant. I used that word to avoid using anything I thought would be considered POV as I consider the word significant to be fairly neutral. To not include a statement about the churches growth would be considered POV in my opinion. Perhaps the wording could be changed margionally to make the statement more readable. user:russellocarroll

[edit] Copyright Infringement

Phil Pringle and CCCOF may not mind, but this page is largely a copy of the one at http://www.ccc.org.au/default.asp?page=PAXaboutpp and therefore probably violates their copyright.

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