Wikipedia:Peer review/Polish-Soviet War
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[edit] Polish-Soviet War
I believe this article is FAC ready with one small exception: it needs a map. Would you recommend any other improvements and changes? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 15:50, 6 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- I'm impressed. Maps over the major battles and troop movements would be a definite pluss, but I would say it's mighty good as it stands. WegianWarrior 08:33, 7 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- Another wonderful article! I wonder if the sentence at the end of the first paragraph (The war ended with the defeat of the Red Army) is too general: it might not be, I just wonder whether it seems too simple. The sections documenting military action are very good, but can anything more be said about wider international attention (I was interested what the French advisors under Weygand were doing there, and those German Communists awaiting their day). The references are usually given surname first in alphabetical order. Otherwise, it is good enough to reach featured status already. Gareth Hughes 10:52, 7 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- Lead is quite long already and have been subject to a 2-week protetion already, so I prefer no to touch it too much, but if you would like to change anything, be bold :> For international attention, there is the entire section, which mentions that French advisers were working on improving logistics etc. As for German Communists, were, they were waiting - more can be found at relevant linked articles, like Communist Party of Germany. I will reformat the references shortly. Tnx for the comments. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 12:21, 8 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- Another wonderful article! I wonder if the sentence at the end of the first paragraph (The war ended with the defeat of the Red Army) is too general: it might not be, I just wonder whether it seems too simple. The sections documenting military action are very good, but can anything more be said about wider international attention (I was interested what the French advisors under Weygand were doing there, and those German Communists awaiting their day). The references are usually given surname first in alphabetical order. Otherwise, it is good enough to reach featured status already. Gareth Hughes 10:52, 7 Mar 2005 (UTC)
