Wikipedia:Pages needing attention/Recreation

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[edit] Recreation, hobbies

  • Karuta needs serious attention, possibly a rewrite - No strucuture, lacks any history, uses first person frequently, and rules are not explained well.
I added sections and modified and edited the first three paragraphs of the history section - mennonot 22:02, 15 Jun 2004 (UTC)
  • I have started making additions to the postage stamp section but am unsure how far this should be taken. If there is anything that people want added, especially relating to GB postal history let me know and I will do what I can. All information from my website can be freely used if required - www.devoted,to/stamps Tallanent 19:07, 15 Jan 2004 (UTC)
  • Cottabus - contains ASCII-encoded Greek words that need converted to Unicode, by somebody who knows more Greek than I do. Salsa Shark 08:14, 3 Jan 2004 (UTC)
Cleaned up the article a bit, put more information about the Greek words on the Talk page porge 06:29, 25 Jul 2004 (UTC)
  • Tightlacer - Those who have been at work on this article seem to be real aficionados who keep adding names and external links without ever having a look at the very stupid definition. --KF 18:17, 6 Jan 2004 (UTC)
I've worked on the text, and renamed it to Tightlacing as it seems to me that the practice is a better encyclopedic article name than the people who do it. -- Morven 07:56, 12 Jan 2004 (UTC)
The article seems to be too BDSM-oriented, and not nearly enough on the historical context. It also seems to need much more editing. -- RJH
  • Lansquenet appears to be copied out of a nineteenth century book and needs modernizing. --Imran 13:07, 16 Mar 2004 (UTC)
  • Tie (draw) needs some work. Moved from VfD. See the talk page for suggestions. --Cecropia 02:44, 28 Apr 2004 (UTC)
I completed a revision this afternoon; see how it looks. CharlieZeb 21:48, 3 May 2004 (UTC)
  • Kikaider - I've no idea what this article is about! Is it a toy, a fictional series of books, a computer game, a cartoon on TV? Someone must know! David Thrale 22:13, 9 May 2004 (UTC)
It is a Japanese anime, but also a live-action television show. Needs to be expanded to explain this. RADICALBENDER★ 16:20, 17 May 2004 (UTC)
  • Item - This page seems to generalize from relatively particular experience. I don't know if it deserves to be rewritten or deleted.MOE37x3 01:47, 5 Oct 2004 (UTC)
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