Talk:Paddlefish

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[edit] Grammar Cleanup

Would someone who is familiar with Paddlefish, preferrably the author, please tidy the grammar in the Paddlefish entry. There are sentences that need altering, but they are ambiguous and so I don't want to alter them at the risk of altering them in the wrong way.

Some of the sentences requiring attention include,

"Paddlefish are also extremely oily if you mount them they have been known to leak out an oily substance"

"One other reason for the decreased numbers is over fishing. During the last century, paddlefish and sturgeon have stimulated the world stock trades because with their eggs (roe), called caviar."

"This feature is predominant of the fish."

Sgoyeau 23:53, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

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