Talk:Old Louisville

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[edit] Filson

In my last change, I stated I would move the Filson link to See also, but that's not necessary, as it's already wikilinked in the article. —  Stevie is the man!  Talk | Work 22:46, 30 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] GA Passed

Congratulations! I have promoted the article to GA status. The next thing I would suggest is working on red links -- either removing them or writing stubs or articles for them. I'd also suggest increasing the number of inline citations as well. --CTSWyneken(talk) 16:54, 14 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Crime section

The 10th paragraph in the Leo source states that crime (reported in the first 1/2 of 2006) was significantly down from the 2005 levels. 4.225.122.15 02:47, 5 October 2006 (UTC)

  • I've gone ahead and fixed it. There should probably be better coverage of crime in general in Old Louisville, there was a great fear of it in the 1970s and 1980s for example, not sure if the crime rates really reflect that. I am not sure where to go for the stats though off the top of my head. --W.marsh 03:31, 5 October 2006 (UTC)

There are several people who have lived in my house since the 1980s who say things are tremendously better than they were. Also, the city as a whole saw a jump of crime in 2005, not just Old Louisville, this should also be mentioned. 4.225.126.134 16:55, 5 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Peer review

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, W.marsh 02:26, 17 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Clean up

I was just doing some minor cleanup on the history section. I added a few places where I thought citations might help as well. Overall pretty good stuff. No real glaring errors, I did fix one minor POV issue, about the amphitheatre being one of the best theatres, which is a completely subjective statement. I'll look over the rest of the article as well. Hope this helps. A mcmurray 08:27, 2 November 2006 (UTC)

I think it actually was considered one of the best, if we source that it's not really a NPOV issue. Anyway thanks for the citation needed tags, most books I'm using on this are non-circulating so I'll add citations when I'm at the library next. --W.marsh 17:01, 5 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] St. James Court fountain

I have been under the impression that the fountain in St. James Court was a leftover from the Southern Exposition. Is that true? If so, that would be a good nugget of info for the article. Stevie is the man! Talk • Work 17:07, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

  • I'll see if I can find anything, it would be an interesting thing to mention... hopefully right after Christmas I'll have time to spend a day at the library. Most of the good books on Old Louisville are non-circulating and out of print. --W.marsh 18:01, 15 December 2006 (UTC)
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