Talk:Old Little Hawk

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I'm assuming that Little Hawk died in 1895 instead of 1995, but would prefer the author to change it.

[edit] Cut & paste?

Many of the sentences use the pronoun "your" as if the author is writing a letter to someone instead of an article on Old Little Hawk. And several sentences sound like they are in "old fashioned" English.

For example:

On September 5, 1877, Little Hawk was together Crazy Horse, when he was arrested by Little Big Man, ordered by General Crook. He makes a notable trouble when the body of your nephew - that received a mortal bayonet wound due your resistance to be detened - was carry out in a wagon. Laying out Little Big Man, in a snatching the revolver way from a Scout, he leveled the gun at the driver who involuntarily fell over into the lap of the attendant by this side. The Indian dissuaded him from taking a shot, and the ambulance proceeded.

Perhaps this a cut & paste problem? Or is it just me? --JustAGal 20:50, 16 August 2006 (UTC)