Talk:Nothing to Hide (Heroes)

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[edit] Style

Should all the episode guides for Heroes be done like this one? I mean with the links at the top of the page that link to the different people?ParalysedBeaver 03:03, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

I did the same thing for the pilot episode, then someone reverted back to a scene-by-scene synopsis. So, the short answer: it depends.Toquinha 07:26, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

Not really. I recommended the scene by scene over your method. No offense, but trying to divid up episode data to character specific sections of an epispde article just isn't seemingly, especially as the character's interact. Character articles already do that. I'd appreciate it if you took the hint and tried something different. Ace Class Shadow; My talk. 08:04, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

So should we edit this one to be like all the previous episodes?ParalysedBeaver 15:06, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

Yeah, probably. I'm not sure how to proceed because I don't want it to be like the various others that have been tagged for cleanup. Ace Class Shadow; My talk. 16:54, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

The last episode before this had a pretty good style, maybe we should copy it. ParalysedBeaver 11:06, 9 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Copyediting

This synopsis is written using short, choppy sentences describing too many little details of the story, making it hard to "see the forest for the trees." I'd fix it myself, except that I missed a few scenes when watching that episode.

I'm in the process of editing it now, as that tag's been there for awhile now and I've got some time. I got about half of it edited and will work on the remaining half either after I get off work or tomorrow at the latest. I'm relatively new here, and have read the guides, so if any experienced user wishes to take a look at what I've got so far, it would be appreciated. Oh, and did Mohinder have any opening/ending statements, as there is none listed and I can't remember. If he did, I'd imagine those should be in here, but I have no way of finding them unless I can find a transcript or if someone can post it here. 27 November 06 -.User:Navex