Talk:Naval Battle of Guadalcanal

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Unfortunately, much of this article appeared to originally be "lifted" from: http://www.answers.com/topic/naval-battle-of-guadalcanal. However, over the past several days I, and apparently a couple of others, have been engaged in extensive rewrites of the entry. By the time we're through, I anticipate that the article will be almost completely original without any potential copywrite issues. Fortunately, as with many topics involving US Navy involvement, there are numerous resources and photographs available on the web from US Government sources that are free from copywrite restrictions. Cla68 16:20, 7 April 2006 (UTC)

I believe Answers.com is copying from wikipedia, not the other way 'round: "This entry is from Wikipedia, the leading user-contributed encyclopedia. It may not have been reviewed by professional editors (see full disclaimer)".

—wwoods 17:06, 7 April 2006 (UTC)

Oh, I see, my mistake if that is true. I appreciate the help in improving on the original entry. Cla68 17:36, 7 April 2006 (UTC)

Hmm, I wonder if that's a first - a major rewrite based on a mistaken idea of originality. Just as a note for the future, you can usually detect actual copyvios by looking through the history and noticing a large addition done as a single edit. Sampling the history here shows that current state was reached very gradually, a sentence or a paragraph at a time. Stan 18:39, 7 April 2006 (UTC)

At first, I wasn't rewriting the entry because I thought it wasn't original. I was just trying to improve on someone else's good initial work. While I was searching around for information to assist my efforts, I found the Answer.com entry and apparently jumped to the wrong conclusion. It's enjoyable to work on an entry and then come back to see that others have corrected mistakes and improved on it in other ways that one didn't think of. It's refreshing after having been involved in attempting to add input to other, more contentious articles on Wikipedia. Cla68 19:16, 7 April 2006 (UTC)

Tell it, brother! :-) —wwoods 08:47, 8 April 2006 (UTC)

Contents 1 Admiral Scott's death 2 Maps 3 Featured Article (FA) Plans 4 GA Promotion 5 Citation spot check

[edit] Admiral Scott's death

From Richard B. Frank's Guadalcanal, pp. 443–4:

"Previous accounts of this action have attributed Scott's death to Japanese gunfire and therefore this matter bears elaboration. ... [Atlanta's action report] shows thirteen hits classed as "5.5-inch," ... but none in the immediate vicinity of Scott's station. Atlanta was also struck, however, by nineteen projectiles identified as 8-inch, undoubtedly from San Francisco ... Seven of these 8-inch hits ... smashed through flag plot, [etc.] ... The location of these hits would coincide with the location of Scott and his staff."

—wwoods 08:15, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

Hammel's book claims Admiral Scott was killed by Japanese fire before San Francisco hit Atlanta. However, I'm with you in placing greater confidence in Frank's information since he uses more original sources in his book than Hammel does. I'm using Hammel's book to put greater detail in the battle narrative but will then join you in crosschecking everything with Frank's account. Thanks for the help. Cla68 11:22, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Maps

Since you can modify images, how about putting a mark, and label, on Henderson Field on the map of Guadalcanal? —wwoods 21:46, 2 May 2006 (UTC)

I'm a novice at it, but I'll do my best. Cla68 01:46, 3 May 2006 (UTC)

Done. Cla68 00:33, 19 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Featured Article (FA) Plans

I would like to nominate this article for FA. I think it's adequately and correctly referenced, avoids stilted and awkward prose, and the images are approved for use on Wikipedia. However, I think the article needs some battle maps to pass the strict FA review from Wikipedia community members, who are vigilant in this respect. I'm going to be purchasing "Campaign Cartographer 2" in the next couple of weeks to try to do maps for this article and others. However, if others who have experience in doing this want to jump in beforehand and get it done, it would be greatly appreciated. I think we need at least one map for the Battle of Friday the 13th and the second surface action (Nov 14th). I suggest using the Frank or Hara books as references. Otherwise, look for my attempts at good maps in a month or so. Cla68 00:49, 19 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] GA Promotion

I have recently reviewed this article & found that it meets the criterion for being a good article. So I have promoted it to GA status. My congratulations to all the contributors for doing a fine job. Cheers. Srikeit^{(talk ¦ ✉)} 18:56, 26 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Citation spot check

As part of this project, I've performed a check on the accuracy of several citations in this article. Results were as follows:

1. Footnote 6. " 12 of the Japanese aircraft were shot down"
   • Checks out. From book: "In reality, 11 of 16 Bettys and one Zero fell..."
2. Footnote 36. "Laffey passed so close to Hiei that they missed colliding by only 20 feet."
   • Iffy. From book: "From Ensign Sterett's vantage point, Laffey seemed to clear Hiei 's bows by less than 20 feet."
     • The statement made in the article is stronger than the statement it's cited to; not so good.
3. Footnote 73. "Due to the confused nature of the battle, the U.S. believed that they had sunk as many as half-a-dozen Japanese ships"
   • Needs work. Presumably drawn from the timeline of the action at [1].
     • For a work of this size, the citation should indicate a specific page number to make it clear what the statement is based on. Factually accurate, but citation should be improved.
4. Footnote 84. "The 35-minute bombardment caused some damage to various aircraft and facilities at the airfield, but didn't put it out of operation"
   • Checks out. From book: "...Admiral Nishimura's thirty-seven minute bombardment", "The Fighter-1 runway was amply cratered", "two of their Wildcat fighters were destroyed and fifteen others were damaged", "In addition to seriously cratering the steel-matted runway, the Japanese...destroyed one Dauntless dive bomber and fifteen Wildcats and damaged seventeen Wildcats", "In that regard, in addition to gutting the fighter contingent, the bombardment had been a thoroughgoing success. But that was not nearly the degree of success Admiral Tanaka was hoping for."
5. Footnote 102. "Using radar targeting, the two U.S. battleships opened fire on the Sendai group at 23:17."
   • Checks out. From book: "...her SG radar picked up returns on on Hashimoto's trio at a range of about 9 miles", "At 2316, Lee granted permission for his captains to 'Open fire when you are ready'". One minute later...Washington discharged her first main battery salvo..."

No really serious problems, but a couple of minor issues need to be addressed. --Robth^Talk 04:24, 26 June 2006 (UTC)

I've corrected the two that didn't check out completely. Cla68 19:49, 26 June 2006 (UTC)