Talk:Mute City

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Mute City is a former good article candidate. There are suggestions below for which areas need improvement to satisfy the good article criteria. Once the objections are addressed, the article can be renominated as a good article. If you disagree with the objections, you can seek a review. Date of review: 14 December 2006

[edit] GA fail

Unfortunately, I've had to reject this GA candidate. This article (in my opinion, of course):

• Lacks structure
• Doesn't fully respect the guidelines for writing about fiction
• Makes several unsourced statements
• Has a few (minor) spelling/grammar mistakes
• Doesn't keep the tone expected of an encyclopaedia

yandman 14:58, 14 December 2006 (UTC)