Talk:Mongolian People's Revolutionary Party

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[edit] POV

The last two paragraphs of this article have a bias against this political party, most strikingly in the last two sentances, which simply make a scathing comment. Some of the diction ("tricks," "cheating") is also of concern. The grammar is also rather poor, and is in need of some retouching. I encourage anyone with knowledge of this party to sort it out into a NPOV. --Palpatine 06:48, 12 May 2006 (UTC)



[edit] changes

I did some rewording on the Gundalai case - he has been detained for 25 hours, not jailed from 2000-2004 - , added another high-profile case, and deleted the cases of B.Batbayar and General Baatar. B.Batbayar (Baabar) certainly was not in prison from 2000 to 2004. He may have been detained at one point that I don't know of, though. J. Baatar was convicted to 7 years in 2003, but for spying, not coorruption.

The allegations after the elections in 2004 were a two-seded affair, however with the oppposition probably having the stronger points. The turnout was actually lower than in 1996.