Talk:Mandy (Billy and Mandy)

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[edit] Cleanup

IMHO, this article (mainly the Biography Section) needs:

1. spelling and grammar checked
2. removal of redundancies (i.e. almost the same thing about the episode My Fair Mandy is repeated in both the 'biography' and 'Mandy's smile')
3. make the article less opinionated - reduce the number of anti-Mandy comments ("Out of everyone else she is serverly hated by most viewers do to the fact she always bosses everyone around and is so full of herself." should be removed or referenced.)
4. Again IMHO, this article focuses too much on how (admittedly) cruel Mandy is. Even the paragraphs which (I think) try to provide a counter-balance come off as snarky and forced.
5. Break it up into sections, paraphrase better, do whatever you need to make each paragraph more distinct. It just seems to me that the biography section is very unfocused. Much of it could be reworded and put in the trivia section.

Tear this request apart, agree with it, do whatever. LordSarir 19:25, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

I agree. The article has grown fast and now it's completely unfocused. Also, the article could use a better picture -- Kwinston 22:57, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

I did a little clean-up. I put some things in trivia, and deleted "passing by" comments that created mess. I think it's better now, but it still needs some work -- Kwinston 23:17, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Stop it

This article is flooded with personal comments and speculations. I deleted this:

"In the first season of the show, Mandy was not as dark and sadistic as she is portrayed now, and was actually just a little moody and bossy. This is because the first season was written by Maxwell Atoms, and from the second season onward, they were written by other staff members."

• That is already said in the main section;
• The remaining is a speculation.

"Mandy is often disliked by fans of the show because of her sadistic attitude and nearly demonic control over everyone, including her own parents"

• No needs to explain. If somebody doesn't like her, then the article should speak for itself.

I will watch the article, and delete similiar statements. -- Henk65 11:16, 14 June 2006 (UTC)

These things should be clarified a bit more, but not so much that nearly ALL of it has to be deleted. After all, even if the article should explain for itself, it needs to be clarified to back it up. Most of these comments are almost the truth, and there is no need to delete them just because of opinions. It is an encyclopedia after all, and this piece needs to be clear enough. They are voicing out who Mandy REALLY is. (And please put your sigs in here!) --Seishirou Sakurazuka 03:12, 14 June 2006 (UTC)

Well, the article already clearly says that she is rude to everyone and similiar -- Henk65 11:16, 14 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Image

I uploaded a new image. I think it's better than the last one -- Henk65 19:23, 8 July 2006 (UTC)