Talk:Light Magic
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[edit] Awkward Sentence
"Light Magic was put on hiatus until 2000 after Labor Day, 1997, but 2000 came and went without any indication of Light Magic ever coming back. "
This is an awkward sentence, so I hope you don't mind, but I fixed it.
[edit] Removal of text
I removed the following text: , which yet again returned, at Disney's California Adventure in 2001
The text was in reference to the Electrical Parade. The return of the Electrical Parade to DCA belongs in the Electrical Parade article, not in the Light Magic article as it had little to do with the history of Light Magic. Light Magic was already gone by 2001.
I also did some copy-editing to remove text that is not entirely encyclopedic:
ill-fated - This is an editorial-type comment that may add color but not substance to the article.
