User talk:Leshalfhill
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[edit] critiscism of the bible
Hi,
I looked at your edit. I don't know enough to know if either version was correct - but its good that you're bold. One thing that doesn't seem to flow well is to say that it has "some basis in fact" but that cities don't show signs of destruction, or whatever. I'm not familiar with it, so I don't know what the significance of that is. Perhaps you fix it up a bit so that it says something like "contrary to the exodus" or "consistant with the exodus" to note which or what is preported fact and which is thought to be myth. Fresheneesz 04:14, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
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- By the way, its customary to sign your name with four tildes (~~~~). That way people know who you are and when you posted. Thanks. Fresheneesz 04:18, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
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- Adding the "not" seems like it cleared up that part pretty well. Its now consistant. Good edit. Fresheneesz 20:49, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
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