Talk:Kidinnu/Comments

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Comments for the article to better it:

  • The article is well written but it lacks in continuous sentences/logical sectionning which would help the reading.
  • Footnote to go with the dates of Birth & Death would help to situate why there could be confusion.
  • As it is, it is close to a A-class article.
  • A lead (see WP:LEAD) section would also give insight into what is coming into the article. Lincher 20:44, 21 August 2006 (UTC)