Talk:Kerala model
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'what is kerala model of economic growth : is it a product of Governmental?
The growth of Kerala is not a product of Governmental planning.So far no good administrators not appreared in Kerala. The people of Kerala is blessed with many non governmental agencies and social leaders. Library net work of Kerala supported by these agencies played a vital role in shaping, disseminating an enthusiasm in developmental activitieis in various local level.(K.N. Raj speech appearred in Indian express daily)
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[edit] Page needs work
Article has little or no wiki. Although it has a few citations, details for some are not given, and they are inline instead of at the bottom of the article (see Manual of Style). Capitalization and odd grammar need attention. Phrases such as "Now consider this" and "Now comes the reason why" sound more like an oral presentation than language used in an encyclopedia. I will try to work in this later, but if anyone comes along in the meantime, great. 24.155.88.186 18:15, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
- Also language such as "It is a coastal land of 44 rivers and two rainy seasons that breeds greens; greens that conquer land, float over water and reach up to palm the skies. God has bestowed abundant natural beauty to this tiny piece of land" reads more like poetry than an encyclopedia. 24.155.88.186 18:31, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Statement in References section
Kerela have the premier educational institute like IIM-Kozhikode, RRL tivandrum
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- This statement was in "References" section and probably should be worked somewhere into the article. Also could use some grammar work. Oswald Glinkmeyer 01:55, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] I wikified your article
I had to change some of the language to make it fit the tone of an encyclopedia. And some of it I removed because it was too enthusiastitic. You are supposed to nave a neutral point of view (WP:NPOV). As you mention on your Talk page, you do need more references.
Also, your Criticism section probably should be larger, as the criticisms you cite are serious. These are the same problems that are facing other countries. Especially when you have zero population growth and and emigrating population, that is a serious problems.
And, as you know, the world is not too enthusiastic about communism right now. I do some work of the Fidel Castro page and there are raging arguments going on. Is there a way you could explain that the form of communism in Kerala was unique and not of the Soviet sort?
I enjoyed working on your article and learning about Kerala. If I can help you further, let me know. And I apologize for any mistakes or misunderstandings I may have incurred in rewording some of your article. Good luck! KarenAnn 16:47, 11 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Kerala model - "Export anything worth - including youth and shrimp"
What is the Kerala model? - It is the policy of "do not let any one have a normal and peaceful life at Kerala". If you are educated, then to earn a living you have to cross the boarders! Rest of us can spend our time by proclaiming the Kerala Model on the strength of that foreign currency.
Then how come educated youth from Kerala? It is the fruit of great efforts by people and organizations like Christian Missionaries, Narayana Guru etc..
What about the nature? Yes she is very kind to God’s own country saying “"It is a coastal land of 44 rivers and two rainy seasons that breeds greens; greens that conquer land, float over water and reach up to palm the skies. God has bestowed abundant natural beauty to this tiny piece of land" is literally true!
