Talk:John P. Jumper
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[edit] WP:MILHIST Assessment
This article presents lots of good details, such as the general's education and his assignments, but very little of it is in prose paragraph form. "Life and Career", or as put here, "Background", should be the primary element of the article, and should come before (or should incorporate) discussions of scandals. LordAmeth 14:38, 29 October 2006 (UTC)