Talk:John Hawkins

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This article doesn't make any sense. There are incomplete sentences... and what, pray tell, is a "rocket shop?" It definitely needs to be reworked. Maybe give it stub status?

Thanks to Masq. Royalist for removing some wierdness ("rocket shop"). I have removed more ("fluff from his brother's mouth"?) and generally bulked up and clarified, as well as paring down the waffle.
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