Talk:Ivanhoe Girls' Grammar School

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[edit] POV check

It is nice that someone took the time to expand the article, and the topics covered give a good description of the school, but there seem to be a lot of NPOV violations. I'm a total newbie when it comes to editing articles, & I'm not sure how to correct this without deleting half the content of the article, so some help would be nice.

--Rovie 13:14, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Removed POV-check tag

I've removed a whole chunk of the POV nonsense. The only tainted part of the article is the "Debating" section, I believe. I can't help but wonder if someone's being a little facetious when they write about the "meticulous garden staff", but whatever... it's a bit better now.

cheers.

130.126.220.138 03:48, 18 April 2006 (UTC)

[edit] potential issues with this article

"The aerobics program is no less experienced, taking two out of three places at the nationals in 2005, and set to rocket to the top for many years to come."

This sentence needs citation. The latter part of the sentence also qualifies as weasel words. I have added the appropriate tag.

"(York rules.)"

I have also removed at this. Some cheeky student I would suggest :-).

Generally this article is good however it makes a few un cited claims. Please fix.--StewartM82 15:15, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

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