Talk:Inu no Taishou

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[edit] Grammar

I'm guessing someone used an online translater to paste the bulk of this article... the grammar is horrendous, and no spoiler warning is included. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 130.39.62.25 (talk • contribs).

[edit] This page needs massive editing

The initial section, before we hit the menu of options, is fairly good; it gives a complete plot summary of what we've seen of Inu no Taisho in the manga and anime up to the current point.

Everything after that, though, is absolutely horrendous. Not only is it replete with bad grammar, but it is full of unwarranted and incredibly long bits of speculation, particularly the badly spelled character analysis. I've deleted the entire set of menu sections that basically retold the movie, along with the 'character analysis.'

For now, I've kept the description page done by the same person who did the above, but it also needs massive editing. I'll probably come back and do it later. Guardsman Bass 22:13, 6 December 2006 (UTC) —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Guardsman Bass (talk • contribs) 22:11, 6 December 2006 (UTC).

[edit] Stop adding back the redundant info, Kaede

Kaede,

The information you posted is already present at the beginning of the article, in a neat, concise form that points out all the known info about the Inu no Taisho. There is no need to include the sections you added, which are full of redundant information. That's why I deleted it.

If you want to add to the article, add something that isn't already in the first section.

Thank you,

Guardsman Bass

Guardsman Bass 20:45, 7 December 2006 (UTC)