Talk:Hominid intelligence
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[edit] References
The books listed under Further Reading were my principal sources (other than my own general knowledge) for this article. Adam 00:44, 19 November 2005 (UTC)
- Ok. I changed Further Reading to References. I don't know the books, but if you think the books cover most of the material in the article, it is probably safe to remove the {{unreferenced}} . Ben T/C 10:36, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Suggested changes
There should be more info on the minds of other great apes. Also, I was under the impression that the first state was in Sumer, about 1000 years before Egypt.
The "Human Evolution" area should be divided into two sub-areas: brain evolution, and physical evolution. Of course the brain is a physical orgajn too, but I mean "everything else" when I say "physical evolution." E.g., bipedalism, lack of fur, etc.
The title for this article should be "Human Brain Evolution," not "Hominid Intelligence." "Hominid" is more correct, as the article discusses our pre-human ancestors, but "human" isn't incorrect, and is more clear to a general audience. The article is about brain evolution, not about intelligence evolution. The two are close but not the same. And "evolution" may be implied by being in the "Human Evolution" area but we can make this more clear.
The first paragraph says, more or less, that humans are distinct from other animals because we have "the ability to reason, plan, solve..." etc. It would be better to start by saying that we have huge brains, four times bigger than our closest relatives, far bigger than we need to survive, and our huge brains should make us less able to survive. In other words, start off with a mystery: how did an anatomical feature that should have made us less successful turn out to make us so successful?
The 3rd paragraph erroneously states that Darwin believed that human evolved by natural selection. In his "Descent of Man," Darwin wrote that man evolved via sexual selection, not natural selection.
The Savannah theory for bipedal evolution is presented without mentioning alternative hypotheses, such as the aquatic ape hypothesis.
The hypothesis that hands caused our ancestors' brains to develop makes no sense, given that chimpanzees, gorillas, etc. also have hands.
The hypothesis that tool-use caused our ancestors' brains to develop is also easily discredited. The huge human brain evolved before anything but primitive tools were used.
Rather than rewrite this article, I'll write another article, entitled "Human Brain Evolution." Then let's discuss who to combine the two articles, along with other articles in this wiki-area.
--unsigned comment by 67.176.41.167 Ben T/C 10:36, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Other species
Someone should probably explain why the phenomoen of intelligence is not as prevalent in other species, despite the advantages that it gives humans. Why don't other species have anywhere near our ability to manipulate the environment? There's a book somewhere that explains that the natural selection for intelligence is not all that great, at least when compared to teeth and muscles, and that in order for intelligence to develop, one needs to not only take into account the social aspect of natural selection, but also the (apparently) precarious survival of the "species" at the "starting stages" of inteligence development. If I could only remember what it was called, and if I only kner the theory had any merit. . . . Anyway, regardless of any teleological concerns, something had to cause it. there are five types of hominid, Austraithecus afarensis, Homo habilis, Homo erectus, Homo sapiens Neanderthalensis, and Homo sapiens sapiens.
68.6.85.167 05:20, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
