Talk:Hitachi Global Storage Technologies

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[edit] Needs Cleanup?

To me, this article sounds more like a PR release than an encyclopedia article. Rather than simply edit it, I have flagged it as such to initiate discussion on the topic.Mrpaco 08:00, 20 June 2006 (UTC)

Looks like someone from HGST marketing edited this entry back in March and added lots of flowery prose — no mention is made of the company hemorrhaging money! The original version seems to be much more objective.
What's to stop marketing departments of companies from making these kinds of edits on their own behalf?
Other editors' vigilance! One should be able to revert edits on the basis of conflict of interest. In this case, however, it was copied straight from www.hitachigst.com/portal/site/en/menuitem.cbba11b16b6e50a7760062f6aac4f0a0/, which is a copyright violation and we can revert back to the original version. JonHarder 22:03, 25 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Initial Version

A simple translation of the barebones [[日立グローバルストレージテクノロジーズ|article] on the Japanese Wikipedia site. At least this is a framework to start from. Those Seagate PR folk are sneaky, editing their entry from anonymous IP addresses. Since I'm logged in, though, I have to maintain NPOV.... GMW 05:06, 5 February 2006 (UTC)